Man shows up in Equestria and has the power to reference different sources of media, but can't fully control it. Just sit back and watch as things go crazy. IT'LL CHANGE YOUR LIFE. Probably not.
5769650 It'd be great if you gave a reason, but 'm going to guess it's along the lines that you originally liked this story for its wackiness and non-seriousness and there was none of that in this chapter?
It's fine in my opinion to have moments of darkness into a usually comedic story. The important part is that it can help the reader appreciate the levity more, and doesn't overwhelm them. Finding a balance that works with the tone of the story will be important. Overall the chapter is okay, and if you're going in the direction of the ~1000 years ago time frame being a violent feudalistic era, and delving into the implications and fallout from Manic's intervention, then I'm very interested in seeing where you're going with the past sections.
So, Reference is dual natured... Interesting. I am actually surprised by the reference to what seems like Tokyo Ghoul, or Rewrite. Maybe you can tie past References ability usage in with a need for something to sustain him, or act as such until a later time, then have him switch over to mana based energy obtaining and usage. It would actually explain things, and you can decide when to make the switch.
Well, that chapter sucked.
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It'd be great if you gave a reason, but 'm going to guess it's along the lines that you originally liked this story for its wackiness and non-seriousness and there was none of that in this chapter?
Well, i can't wait to see more. but...it really sad about anon.
*Reaction of seeing the flame war coming*
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*While reading the chapter 6*
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i don't mind gore but i kind of prefer the wackyness of the story maybe you could blend that with seriousness
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That's sort-of the plan.
I think.
It's fine in my opinion to have moments of darkness into a usually comedic story. The important part is that it can help the reader appreciate the levity more, and doesn't overwhelm them. Finding a balance that works with the tone of the story will be important. Overall the chapter is okay, and if you're going in the direction of the ~1000 years ago time frame being a violent feudalistic era, and delving into the implications and fallout from Manic's intervention, then I'm very interested in seeing where you're going with the past sections.
5770619 Great :D
I. SAY. YAY!
I like it, though I wasn't all that in to every sentence being a new paragraph. Still better than a wall of text.
5770674
This guy.
He gets it.
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Yes! I need more of this! Things I do wrong in formatting, and the like.
LEARN FROM PINKAZOID'S EXAMPLE EVERYONE.
That is your name now. Accept it.
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Yeah, pretty much.
So, Reference is dual natured... Interesting. I am actually surprised by the reference to what seems like Tokyo Ghoul, or Rewrite. Maybe you can tie past References ability usage in with a need for something to sustain him, or act as such until a later time, then have him switch over to mana based energy obtaining and usage. It would actually explain things, and you can decide when to make the switch.
what did he turn into a manticore?
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....... All Kaneki-kun wanted was a date.
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This chapter confused me. What was going on?