The Mane Six pair off and explore mind and body behind closed doors.
Twilight casts a spell that doesn't go as advertised. SURPRISE! I wasn't expecting the acting out part though. That was different.
I think you left your editing notes at the end....
Loving the story though!
4371341OMG I feel silly! It pulled in the comments from my prereaders on this chapter for some reason. I was wondering why this chapter was so much longer than the others... now I know!
“Ooh, everything looks so rosy!”
Doesn't Pinkie already see the world through Rose Colored Glasses?
4406800 Nope, she sees it inverted. Colors, directions, sound, everything. I would know, I'm a ghost. BOO MOTHAFUCKA
4371605 I loved this chapter for one reason...I KNEW IT!!! Twilight writes FANFICTIONS!!! Hot Damn, I love it when I'm right.
Twilight casts a spell that doesn't go as advertised. SURPRISE! I wasn't expecting the acting out part though. That was different.
I think you left your editing notes at the end....
Loving the story though!
4371341
OMG I feel silly! It pulled in the comments from my prereaders on this chapter for some reason. I was wondering why this chapter was so much longer than the others... now I know!
Doesn't Pinkie already see the world through Rose Colored Glasses?
4406800 Nope, she sees it inverted. Colors, directions, sound, everything. I would know, I'm a ghost. BOO MOTHAFUCKA
4371605 I loved this chapter for one reason...I KNEW IT!!! Twilight writes FANFICTIONS!!! Hot Damn, I love it when I'm right.