when the heart aches catch up to you and words cut deep sometimes all you need is somepony to just sit and listen
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All things a Flutter
I'm new-ish to the fandom by about 6 months but i love everything about it the music, the fanfiction, the bronies and pegasisters, its all just so awesome..oh and I'm 24 btw old i know and a musician
All things a Flutter
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This was a great story apart from spelling and grammatical errors, but otherwise you're fine!
i'll fix most of it tomorrow...but thank you its still a big WIP
I misread the title as Behind Blue Eyes. Don't know if you've ever heard it, but I think it might fit for this story (yet to read it, that's soon to be fixed xD). Here's a link. It might be a bit broken since I'm on mobile.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?app=desktop&persist_app=1&v=BfuWXRZe9yA
So, I read it, and while I see this more as a one shot, it does have some great potential to keep going. Just need to get some pre-readers and proofers (same thing?) to fix the grammatical errors and you're set. I enjoyed the story a lot, though the flow was a bit fast and choppy (that may be just because of how I read, if I see a comma, I actually take a short pause before continuing... >_>). I've never seen a Colgate/Pinkie Pie ship, so this should be interesting, should you choose to continue this. Good luck with this and any other future stories you have planned!
Forgot to do this earlier, but you have earned yourself another like, a favorite, a follower, and a Spike.
hahaha awesome song and it fits my story so great~ and thanks for the fave and follow
and yes Colpie is now my thing lol~
Fantastic story. Could of had a bit more of a build up. But great non the less. Thumbs up for you.
Awesome story, however for future reference, I think it would be a good idea to split up paragraphs using the "Enter" key twice so the story won't be a massive wall of text. Also, the entire story was in bold text.
Really good story!
4290643 haha done and done i had it like that at first then i re edited it and forgot to section it out again but thanks for the feedback
thank you everyone for the likes faves and support for my fics i just need ideas for continuing Dancer in the dark
Just a heads up, I apologize for being blunt like this.
This story was terrible. And calling it a story is being nice. Your plot wasn't there, you had no build up even for a one-shot, the text was crammed together, and it looks completely rushed. I know this was in 2014 but you need to improve a ton.