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It's always nice to read clop that actually cares to convey, and make you feel, the love involved. My compliments to the author.

As a polymor myself please tell your friend that they did more to capture the ideas behind that than anyone else I've read. I wish more people thought the way I did, and as these characters do.

And now I want to see the sequel where Twilight goes to see the trio as they're going to the hospital to deliver!:rainbowkiss:

4198372 I may just commission him to write that.

4197798 I shall indeed, my fellow polymor!

4194633 Yeah he did a pretty sweet job getting the feelings across. I love his work!

I may not be one for polygamous love, and on an unrelated note have the emotional capacity of a teaspoon but reading this felt like walking over the uncanny valley on a bridge made of glass meaning I could see something I would usually not be comfortable reading but still continued on. I like how everyone is fleshed out and all three lovers come across as believable...lovers for a lack of a better word. Regards to the writer for good work!

4382556 Coaldust, Dai and Friday may just be based on real people. You never know...



>.> They totally are.

I enjoyed this look at polyamory--it was wonderfully real. It seems that a lot of the time I see the word come up in fiction, it's just to give reasons for a couple to have sex with a lot of different people. The "amor" is there for a reason!
It seems that even in stories with polyamorous groupings (... what is the correct term for that? I'd use 'families', but that has some implications of children) the term is avoided or I find 'polygamous' used in its place,even when they aren't married.

An interesting premise, but the dialogue was way too clinical.

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