A pregnant fetish is required to read this stories.

I've got the keys, now let me iiiiiin

The subject matter is definitely unf-worthy, but yeah, the language is rather difficult. I'll try combing through this chapter later on to see if I can straighten it out for you.

4527319 Aww, you are too kind. I believe I can still improve.

4523717 Thank you so much for helping! ^w^

Please, continue. I find this...
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...fascinating.

Let you know if there are any grammatical errors? Um...where do I begin?
Unfortunately, they're everywhere. Every corner of the story has them. But you're new to English, right?

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I would say, for his level, it was pretty decent. However, the people who know English like I do perform at a FAR higher quality than this. Though, beauty sits in the eye of the beholder, I suppose.

4684158 Not really new but still unfamiliar with it. Maybe you can point out some errors that appear frequently?

Can we expect to see Glisten or Blue Drip?

4714259 Of course.

4716860 Mind=blown

Love Nest felt very uneasy as her was sexing with the creature,

Much confuse.
English isnt my first language too!
The only reason my mistakes dont show is because I dont cant type that much.
Maaaybe switch 'her' with 'she'?

3/10 for grammar.
For example...

I had this story in my mind for a long time but I really had no confident of my English. If you found any grammar error, feel free to tell me! >.<

In my English*.
If you found any grammar errors (should actually only be 'If you found any errors'.)