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Wild Vulpix


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Based off of the song Rosetta Stoned by Tool off of their 10,000 Days album.

Rainbow Dash has a close encounter with the fourth kind in this alternate reality. Too bad she forgot her pen. And that the folks at the hospital don't believe her. Strapped down in a gurney, can she retell her experience and make them believe her?

Art by dear friend Stefani Lutece.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

That's a VERY good drawing.

That Rosetta stone looks like it got Rosetta PWNED.

I have no idea what's going on...but i like it.

This story has a damn good intro, in my opinion, a brilliant hook for the readers. Let's see if you can keep up the momentum, my dear boy.

Oh, by the way:

The rest of the hospital was full of bustling staff and wretching patients.

Did you intend for that to be retching instead?
Also:

That stuff couldn't be healthy for a contact high

Might want to change that "Couldn't have been healthy", since some especially picky readers might claim this as a tense change (Even though I'm not entirely sure it is.), but hey, it's your story and it's pretty damn good so far.

4156382

Ahhhh. Thank you.

4157144 Ah, no problem. You actually appear to have some talent, and on fimfiction, that is something to be nurtured, most definitely.

Overwhelmed as one would be, placed in my position, such a heavy burden now to be the one.
Born to bear and bring to all the details of our ending, to write it down for all the world to see.

But I forgot my pen.

Shit the bed again,

Typical.

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