Sweetie Belle discovers a strange object in Rarity's room. Can she, and the rest of the crusaders, unlock its mystical powers?
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Don't expect anything good from my stories. I'm an artist, not a writer/author. If you want simple stories with little to no detail, then you've come to the right place.
Sweetie Belle discovers a strange object in Rarity's room. Can she, and the rest of the crusaders, unlock its mystical powers?
NOTE: The sex tag is for language, nothing more.
The writing is rough, but it's not bad. The humor is not as tasteful as it tactful. All together, the story is palpable, but not savory.
I'll give it a rating of 5.7/10
Keep working at it. You can write well.
Ooh do one about Spike and the magazines!
Oh, this was inspired by Stick of Truth? I thought it was from Saints Row.
Omfg funny as shit
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I saw it coming before I even read it. You're my ifunny bro, though, so it made it THAT much better.