spike winds up being ditched by rarity but a certain blue maned pony helps him have fun.... pehaps a little too much fun
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i dont have time for this right now but later ill make my short bio 20% cooler
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DUde i like where this is going but the GRAMMAR.
Amazing writing and idea but i am a octavia<3scrath die hard
Still you have my like and intrest
Use a some polish and you will have a real diamond here. Either way I want to see where this goes.
wtf
Holy cow i was not expecting this many views so soon
yay thanks a lot
Still could use an editor but this is still an interesting story.
4142484 Its a good story. I can't wait for more.
i just posted chapter 3
4143311 lol here it is
Kewl
Spoiler Alert, Rarity dump Blueblood for being an A-hole and A-hole to Spike. I got to be Honest, do you really have to put Blueblood in this instead putting some random Stallion?
It just we all know that Blueblood will be a A-hole to spike and try to get Rarity despite what he did in the Gala, she disgrace him, and probably my expectations will be that Rarity try to get spike. I don't know, I could be wrong what I said, this is your story. Anyway, good chapter, can't wait what happen next.
Still here, still liking this story.
These paragraphs look weird. I highly advise that you spend some time sprucing them up to look neater as it generally makes it more pleasant to read.
4145327 actually i already know that but i wanted the person to be royal and he's the first that came to mind
I like the story, but I have a few things: GRAMMAR CHECK YO. AND CAPITALIZATION. AND PUNCTUATION.
You really need a proofreader and all that jazz. Secondly you need to get your peoples from ponies right. Other than that, the story is very well written (aside from the grammar and all the other stuff) and I'm interested into seeing more into this. 
Good job. 
This should interesting, now their on Vinyl's terf.
Well this is one of the best ships for Spike now that I have read about it can't wait for more.
4173163 thanks it just came to me
Yum yum spike might get some lol
urge to stab blueblood rising
Need an editor?
I can help with the awkwardity of the story.
Its good but have you thought of mabe getting an editor to read over your chapters for you
I actually have that song on my phone (vynilicious)
4200712 how can i send u the stories?
4202521
I think when you write a chapter i will get a message and if its private then you have to send me a password to your book and i can read and edit it for grammar....
hey everyone im a letsplayer now, i just recently started but yeah kingdom hearts is the first game i decided to go with, i kno the audio kinda sucks but i hope its funny, please comment on youtube, and subscribe if you liked it,
4202547 ok
4202569
Alright im checking with someone right now to see if im right
Wow this Vi is alittle unstable, I mean she only saw them talking and EVERYONE knows she treats Spike like alittle brother. I know she is alittle self conscious but that is a huge jump. Then what happen BAM!!!!!. "If" she makes it out of this she will really have to learn to mellow out and not be so dramatic (kinda funny saying that about someone and it not being Rarity lol
)
She'll walk it off, and later she apologize to spike for running away, and they live happily ever after! Lol
Good chapter though!
"Why of course darling i love social gathering, and there even more fun with friends"
DAM you just got put in the friend zone AGAIN
OH SHIT OH SHIT OH SHIT Vinyl is my favorite nooooooo.
Not exactly surprised, Vinyl in this story doesn't have much confidence in herself when it comes to dating Spike. Even the smallest thing could cause her to think that Spike decided to go after someone else. I hope Spike manages to save her, it would help clear the air.
These awkward moments always seem to keep happening with Spike and vinyl, and now she once again is blaming herself. How will Spike be able to talk to her this time, and how will this affect Rarity?
a little atrocious with the spelling here aren't ya?
lol, hey guys , this was a test to you all, i wanted to see how you'd all react, you all passed with flying colors and took it in stride
Its good to see they made up
4168299
Was so about to say this. Glad somebody else did.
4228873
Oh lol.
Awesome shipping but . . . I go to agree Grammar could use serious work. Other than that . . . WUB ON!!!
Best . . . Ship . . . . EVER!!!!!
So ADORABLE!!!
gasp! i found another Spike x Vinyl Scratch story! I never thought I'd see another one after the one I wrote
I guess you could say, Spinyl! (Ba dum crash) no? Anyone? All righty then
Baaaaaaaaaaaa grraaaammmmuuurrrr. Okay let's see here, you need to capitalizing your "I"'s. Two don't EVER use that many commas, from I probably need to recheck but I'm positive I didn't see many periods in there. And last but most definitely not least, DONT USE THE WRONG TYPE OF "there, their, or they're" as it is something your learn to use right in the fourth grade. As seen in many comments below mine, this story could come off very well with a bit of editing and while Spinyl wouldn't be my favorite ship, you should throw some comedy in there. :) ~tripledeckerbrony
Okay as long as the story is coming along you NEED to fix the grammar soon. And as for writing styles, how about instead of
Vinyl smiled "Oh right." She laughed, gave him half, and they parted ways for a while.
Just tryin to be helpful here. ~tripledeckerbrony
i like this
Here is what I want to say to blue blood
''Look pal unless you want your blue blood on the floor and have the fancy beaten out of you back of"
Need more stories like this and also chrysalisxspike