A extremely intelligent 12 year old filly is forced to fly and control a Lunar Fleet space carrier, alone, after the passing of her parents and the crew of the ship. Her age, gender, and small size often overlook her extraordinary skills of flying a decent sized carrier. However, the Lunar Republic may be able to use her in yet another war with the Solar Empire, only 8 years after the revolution that split them apart. It all starts with a daring rescue that puts a Lunar squadron in her rather lonely environment.
Lily Pond (Captain Invictus as she calls herself) will have to accept her past and go above and beyond her limits to possibly help save a lost cause.
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I have a feeling people didn't like what you did with the prologue and put out some red thumbs. They should really lay down some comments about why they didn't like the story if they are going to downvote one...
I enjoyed the prologue. The cliffhanger is frustrating though, especially this early. You really know how to do that thing with the suspense...
Keep going. This is going to be awesome
4151942 I didn't want to write a 7000-8000 word prologue, honestly. Not because I'm too lazy, but because nobody is going to want to read 8000 words about characters they don't know, and who are undeveloped.
I never got many thumbs down on any stories, so this is a motivation killer
I truly am enjoying this story so far. I can't wait till you get to the real meat of the story