WOOHOO!

BATPONIES!

...couldn't resist. Still consider them to be highly underused.

Smut! Gimme smut and nothing but!
Perfect timing, just came home.
Is it gonna be a series or a one-shot?

4104607 A series obviously.

AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW YYYYYYYYEEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vietnam

Capitalize...

I'm willing to bet someone downvoted this because they saw the human tag. Any takers?

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Yep, how silly of me to comment before reading the actual thing.

Now, I have to admit, this one is written quite well. As expected from the guy. The initial fighting scene, the XO exposition, the characters themselves... I think that one of AP's greatest gifts in writing is that he can make the reader see the bright beams of light of the vast personalities behind his characters from the very beginning of each story, and then develop the plot and the characters themselves in such a way that the beams turn out to be the prophets of the radiating sunrise in our hearts.

@Anonymous Pegasus...

Just a friendly point-out for your cover image... If you are going to use the popular OC Midnight Blossom from the fan-artwork(s) of the very talented DeviantArt(ist) Equestria-Prevails, you should Source Link the image as well as credit him for it.

Damn, I thought they were actually fighting! Glad they weren't. So... they going to be on that hillside for awhile?

4104698 Funny, it's an Ingress story. I thought they were all like that?

You have earned a favorite, like, and follow.

This should be very interesting. I can't wait to see what you got in store for us!

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That's actually pretty normal.

Every Story who has the Human Tag will be downvoted since this fandom hates and despises humans.

I wonder how Nightshade would have reacted if someone like Solid Snake would be her partner ;)

Jokes aside. Nice one so far. Will definitely follow this story. Keep it up.

hurry up wit the updates! THIS IS REALLY COOTSIE WOOTSIE! And I hope for secks. But no pressure.

4104604 too few do them justice (nice Spike Spiegel pic)

Holy shit, it's a multi-parter.
Yes.

lol Maths.
And for those who don't know, 1.5*1000/1.25= 1200

Nice cover pic

She was threatining to cut his dick off? LOL Thats a first.

This... I like this...

If you get time to respond to this comment it'd be much appreciated. Exactly how far between are your postings on an average basis?

I don't like fics where humans are outplayed by Celestia, because that segment about the EQs getting what they want over the humans was bull. Also, Celestia hunting people in another country sounds shifty, surely illegal.

More Please

4104759 Woops. I finished this all up and posted it at like 3AM, after my military friend finished picking through it and telling me what to fix. Hence, I kinda forgot heaps of things.

4106536 K.

I don't remember a NH5 in your other ingress stories.

4107049 It's there. There just wasn't a name for it.

4106202 Illegal in China? Probably. What do they intend to do about it, piss off a god like creature who at this point they had very tenuous early contact with? Start a war with a plane of existence with a single way in or out of that needs the consent and power of the ponies in the other place to maintain, again, guarded by a PAIR of godlike creature, where nothing more advanced than a flashlight works? This is of course ignoring if any kingdoms allied with Celestia wouldn't come to her aid at a time of war, so your not just fighting Equestria but potentially an entire worlds military might.

As for less violent means, what, Impose tariffs or a trade embargo with a place they don't do trade with yet? Give a stern talking to on the international community? It undoubtedly pissed China off, but I imagine there aren't THAT many solutions they could do about it, other than refuse trade or business with Equestria, which would leave them out of what would essentially be an economic gold rush for a until now untapped trade resource of a planetary scale that could change the economic powers. With the ponies help any third world barren country could become wealthy by way of turning into a exotic agricultural farmland by magic, or any of the other uses of it. China saying they want no part of this would be suicidally stupid for them in politics and economics.

Thats STILL if China even acknowledged this publicly, considering they used mercenaries and the whole mess never officially happened, they wouldn't really have grounds for negative repercussions anyway. China probably grumbled, distanced themselves from the mercenaries as best they could manage, declared they had no knowledge of their actions and didn't sanction it, and left the kidnappers to the wolves.

4106536

Your comments make me want to have sex with an elephant

4107092 This man, he gets it!

4107049 I believe it was just listed as some kind of drug that kept humans from getting ill by exposure to magic, but never given a clinical or over the counter name for it. Just "Anti-Magic pill." I know it was mentioned at least in spooning silver.

4107092

That's one of the best explanations of what most likely happened in the back story I've heard in a good long while. You sir, should be applauded.

Also, thanks for the use of the Starlight scope. My dad had told me about those when he was in during Vietnam. He never went to 'Nam, instead he was sent to Germany, but he said that they were all taught the basics of how to use them. It was the actual snipers that got the in depth training on them.

Seriously, good job.

4107400

Eh, mostly comes from a passive knowledge of how foreign relations work. Terry Pratchett was a big help to grasping such concepts when I was young. His stories conveyed politics, city function, law, war etc in a way that was easier for a teenage mind to understand....and were just in general hilarious and filled with Dwarves and Trolls and such. I'm not an expert by any means, but the statement I made seems like the most obvious outcome to Celestia coming in person and beating the snot out of a rogue (If only officially) military division which kidnapped her citizens.

For his take on War and Foreign Politics I'd recommend Jingo, which is about a island that appears between the nations of Anth-Morpork and Klatch and the two are at the brink of war for claiming the island for their country. As well as to a lesser extent, The Fifth Elephant, where Commander Vimes of the Watch is caught in the politics of a neighboring kingdom of Dwarves electing a new king.

Good God; This was just posted today and I'm already dying for more!!! YAY INGRESS!!!!!!

This.....looks interesting as fuck. There aren't enough Bat-pony specific fics. Can't wait for more.

Looks like another great ingress fic... can't wait for another chapter

We'll see. I generally dislike HiE of most kinds, but you never know.

NUUUUU dam..i had a bat pony Named Night Shade for what ive been planning. T.T

Maybe it's just me stereotyping, seeing how I'm not familiar with this particular version of Equestria yet and don't really have any canon information on them either, but -- sleeping at night, having trouble seeing in the dark, getting all cold and shivery on top of a mountain despite being a natural flier (who I'd imagine would be either be naturally adapted to those sorts of temperatures or else at least know how to prepare for them)? Not exactly traits I'd immediately associate with a bat pony at all, let alone a supposedly professional military one.

It's not that I don't like the characters or don't want to find out where the story is going next, but those bits did kind of jump out at me.

4108380 Yeah, gotta agree with you on that one. But then in some clopfics the writer accidentally does overlook SOME details when trying to get to the sex parts as fast as they can.

No offense to the author though. But I imagine someone is going to berate me anyways, so yeah, bring it on.

From a Cracked article I've read:

Snipers aren't deadly because they carry the biggest guns; they're deadly because they've learned how to weaponize math.

moar!

The terror that flaps in the night is...cuddly.

I like this story a lot so far and feel like it has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Just as we get to choose specific ponies for joint operations on Earth.”

Also, this could be an awesome side story to have. A story about a pony on one of these joint operations on Earth.

cuddle-times with a fluffy batpony ...i'll die sooner or later

Please continue This is getting good!

I was just wondering how often your updates are ;)

Dave, a soldier from earth, is chosen by Nightshade

The claws of HEUGH

This is a very interesting story, It will be funny to start to see a relationship form between the two as she will "clearly" try to fight it and keep up her tough exterior lol. I do want to hear some more back story about both of them, I feel she might have had a interesting life before hand.I hope she has a funny aspect about her like she just melts if you scratch her behind the ear and he teases her about it comparing her to his cat again lol.

My attention. You have it. I don't know what voodoo or soul-bartering you practice in your spare time. Most stories, I read with a sense of detachment. Yours, for the most part, i can't help but get drawn in to.

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The source tag is messed up, it's just linking back to this page with an ever-increasing number of /equestria-prevails.deviantart.coms tacked on the end.