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That was a instance chapter I loved it .I hope Celestia and Luna are going to be part of his herd.I can't wait to see what happens next.I hope that they are all going to be ok
He mated with Pinkie before using her element. So what, when he gets it, he's going to have full power armor without even training? I don't like that. The rest of the chapter is nice though, especially the end scene.
4272961 oh you can expect something to happen with Luna and Celestia
4273878 maybe... I can't say much otherwise I might spoil what i've got planned
so next herd be rarity or fluttershy?
My guess is Rarity
4274292 yo when i get my pc back in around 2 weeks maybe if i'm lucky sooner i'll help proof read that is if everything still works properly.but yeah pm me if you'd like me to do so:)
I liked this chapter, but something is bothering me. With his three prior girls, he used their elements first, learned to use them decently thru training, mated with them, then finally mastered the sword with that element. Now, he slept with Pinkie and hasn't even seen her element. I hope he still has to train with the Element of Laughter, yet can't master it yet. After all, he hasn't bonded with ALL of Pinkie.
I know something is going to save Jesse's ass (I don't think you would have him killed off yet, or this would be a really sh***y story), I just don't know what or who.
Please hurry and write the next chapter.
But don't hurry TOO much. Quality over speed after all.
Can't see the newest chapter.
What is the password So I can see it?