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well, do what your best, also mario kart 8 is in store now just let you know
so, now his lovers (and Celestia) know everything. They know about Blaire, Eterna, the sword needing the Elements and him needing to bond with all six Element bearers.
Q&A time again:
Timing. She wants this battle on a grand stand. Where there will be no denying that she is better than her sister.
Jesse said it best. When Eterna destroyed that dream realm, she destroyed most of the effects from it. Especially, a lot of the healing he received. Either that, or when Nazaret blasted him, it caused the bruises to reappear.
As much as they all want Jesse for themselves individually, they don't mind settling for a herd with all the Element bearers/Best friends. So, him getting Fluttershy will 'complete the set'.
Jesse and Fluttershy will (hopefully) have sexy times. I expect Angel to try to be a cock blocker though. After Jesse finally bonds with Flutters, he will probably receive a very special going away present from his lovers before he sets out to meet and train with Eterna.
Neh, titles can give things away. I like to be surprised.
As usual, I look forward to the next chapter.
Six centuries means six hundred. Blaire and Harold fought six thousand years ago, so the term you're looking for is millennia. Six millennia ago.
4474163 Ahhhh true, thank you for helping me with this I can't believe i missed that
I loved it all it was a awesome recipe on what is going on so far.And I hope Eterna will be ok.And I hope Luna, Celestia and Fluttershy join in the herd soon.And the part with Celestia was funny.
gj on the chapter.
4475671 Thanks man, always love hearing from my readers when they enjoy
4482195 Good Job on being a cool guy
4484679 Heh heh. Thanks for saying I'm cool, but in all honesty, I'm nerdy.
Was thinking about reading this, but considering how bad the grammar is in the description alone, well, maybe I'll pass.
I've never understood this. If you realize that your grammar is bad and makes the story incredibly difficult to read, then why don't you do something about it? And if for whatever reason you can't do it yourself (if English isn't your first language and you seriously struggle with it), then why don't you just go to one of the many proofreader groups and ask them for help? It's not even hard to find a group, as just typing "Proofreader" into search brings up several. In fact, you can also use a proofreader to help brainstorm, so that makes them even more helpful.
Seriously, just pointing out in the description (to be fair, it was clear enough without the warning) that the story has bad grammar doesn't actually make anything better. Anyway, good luck with your fic.
4543033 I knew this was coming and was waiting for it, so thank you sir for being the first to deliver. Going back through the description I realize that it really need grammatical help, I do have a proofreader to help out with chapters but for a while it had just been me since he/she had something going on and wasn't able to help.
I will go back through the description and fix it now, should've done it sooner but I guess I was just lazy and didn't feel like it (horrible of me) but I hope you'll reconsider and take a look at the story in anyway, ignoring my bad grammar as since writing this story i've been trying to improve as best as I can.
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It's nice to hear you're improving, as well as actually taking the time to get a proofreader. Also, yeah, fixing the description really should have been done first. If you want to draw people into the story, then you have to show how serious you are, and the description is the best place to do this. If someone sees a bunch of writing errors in the description, then naturally they're going to assume the story itself is not much better.
Still, thanks for clearing that up for me. I think I will go and take a look at this.
4543033 Good eye and indeed I hope you enjoyed the story if you have read it to the latest chapter and etc.I tried helping proofreading and telling where the general location of the errors were and still am trying to help him improve with grammar and so far its going decently but still has its ruff edges .Also you make so many good points tehe i almost think you are a sibling of mine....Wait Is that you clara(Thats me cant think of any other name thats not cheesy such as this one yay for cheesiness woop woop)Also have a great day and life in general and all that sentimental crap yay
4914434 maybe.
Well, time to fuck another pony
CHASE TIME!!!! YAY!