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How Cold is a Broken Heart

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Vinyl and Octavia have always been close. So what happens when Vinyl receives a call that might just change her life for the worse ? Will she break down or will she pull through? Only time can tell.

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Shadow_Wolf

Shadow_Wolf #1 · Mar 19th, 2014 · · ·

It seems a little short and the ending is very abrupt in my opinion, but it is pretty well written for your first fic. Good job here.

monteith18

monteith18 #2 · Mar 19th, 2014 · · ·

wipes tears
OK now that i have stopped crying i can say brilliant fic

Rainbow Moonshine

Rainbow Moonshine #3 · Mar 19th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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Thank you for the support! And i'll know for next time to put in more detail.

Shadow_Wolf

Shadow_Wolf #4 · Mar 20th, 2014 · · ·

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The detail was not actually an issue, it was quite well done as it stands... I'll read it again and give you some better feedback/explain myself better when I've not been up for 36 hours straight... there's no possible way for me to give even descent feedback at this time ^^;

Rainbow Moonshine