This story is a sequel to Scary Story
PRINCESS HEART, a changeling princess and a daughter of Queen Chrysalis from Hive Chrysalis unable to shapeshift has been travelling all over the omniverse protecting it from the evil villains that would seek to destroy everything for their amusement. Today her journey has brought her to a specific universe in Equestria's multiverse to undo an evil mind controlling Geas curse that's been casted repeatedly for the last 1000 years by an Earth pony mare from Discord's time before his original imprisonment by the princesses of the Sun and Moon, Celestia & Luna.
Now watch as she exposes a villain who stole the filly, Applebloom's body for their own using the Geas and body switching spells to achieve immortality and how she'll make sure things are as they should be again and undo a tragedy caused by the actions of this mare. They'll travel eventually to Tartarus and meet Tirek the Centaur Ruler, Overlord and Judge in Tartarus to judge the mare for her crimes against Equestria.
This story is a sequel to Scary Story by Diamond Sparkle a wonderful writer and RPER. I wrote this story from a chat RP we did to tie up loose ends from the original story and change a tragic ending to a happy one.
A few references here and there are sure to amuse you all. And as a challenge to you readers, can you guess what each reference is and where they're from or what they're to?
Also to those who might be wondering, a Geas is a very vile and evil curse that controls the mind and body, forcing it to the will of the caster. If they want you to never speak of what they did to you, of using a Geas on you, they will order it and the Geas will imprint it in your mind. No attempts to reveal it yourself will work, it would take outside help to find out and break it. If they switch bodies with you, then use the Geas, they can make it to where you can never tell anyone who you really are and who the imposter is. Any attempts to do so whether by saying your name or even writing your name down will only come out as the name of the person who's body you're trapped in. Interestingly enough the series Code Geass may have used this concept for the Geass power seeing how there are similarities between the 2 now that I think about it.
I'm sorry, you meant well, but it's not taken off. RPs need a lot of polishing before they can be turned into finished fics.
the last thing this site needs is some Scary Movie clones
4092446 It was suppose to be a sequel to the Scary Story fanfic Diamond Sparkle wrote giving it a better ending than the original had that was a tragic one. Hardly anyone died like happens a lot in actual scary movies and the culprit was punished appropriately. ^^;
4092009 perhaps. This was my first completed story for FIMFiction so there could be more later on. ^^
Pretty Grim, DEEP stuff here.
Actually, that mention of 'stealing unicorn horns' reminds me of an idea I had for a Metroverse story.
in which Helix has the hyper-evolved Sunset Shimmer and Trixie Lulamoon steal unicorn horns so to use them as an alternate power source
(treating the horns themselves as if they are batteries, as to my knowledge, Unicorn Horns are an energy conduit)
Anyways, this was good (POOR Applebloom
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HA, love that.
it makes me look at "Steed Reaper" as Grim from Grim Adventures
(now all he needs is a Jamaican accent, and this would be funnier)Not to question this or anything,
but, I seriously doubt Tirek would show mercy of any kind.
I should know, I've seen how the guy operates.
I am having Avatar flashbacks, now (perhaps that was the intent)
Wow, Celestia, Luna and Twilight are real COLD in this one (It's almost Scary.)
Diamond Tiara being affectionate..
MIND. BLOWN.
Mind STILL blown
4093148 indeed it is but what would you expect from a sequel to a horror fic of sorts? You read the original as well?
4093170 Interesting. Heh those 2 should meet sometime.
4093270 *shrugs* Never know I mean in the multiverse this one is strict but merciful. And fair as well for a warden and judge as they should be. plus I saw one that was comical in a fanfic that I think was cancelled. involved Discord and Grogar being old buddies and maybe nerds. Don't really remember all the details.
4093327 Indeed that was the intent. Cabbages joke seems popular on FIMFiction when I googled it.
Yeah given the severity of the crimes and how Diamond Sparkle writes Celestia as in her stories it's somewhat expected in a sequel to a story of hers.
4093376 Heh she may be a jerk but she still has a heart.
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No, not quite yet (I read your fic because you asked, and we're pals)
do you think I would enjoy the original??
4116765 Possibly. It's pretty good for a horror story and has a pretty dark ending seeing how the sequel here tries to undo it to grant a happy ending instead by solving the problem the original made. I highly recommend the other stories Diamond Sparkle writes as well. Pretty good stuff involving changelings and romance. a few dark and tragic stories here and there but written well.
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I guess I am still used to Tirek being the MLP version of Unicron of Transformers.
You know..being "The Ultimate Evil, Harbinger of Death, Chaos and Destruction" and all that jazz.
4116892 I guess that's the main version we see of him in stories. I know that version appears in The Elements of Harmony and Savior of Worlds story as the possible main villain now that he's revealed himself and kidnapped Megan.
First I would point out that the Summary would have been better if it had Paragraphs.
You are refering to an Earth Pony, right? Just like all the Apples?
What is Geas, assuming it isn't just a typo, but it is confusing to those of us who doesn't know.
it would be preferable, if we don't need to read the entire Prequel to understand the Ssummary, or the Story.
I like the idea of mentioning Tartarus, even if this may be a chance spoiler?
4116933 thank you for adding my story Shining Phantom than really
5987263 Anytime. Though I agree with everyone, you should get an editor and prereader I think. It'll help make the story a lot better. Also longer chapters would be a plus as Shining Phantom has the potential to be a pretty cool story if done right. ^^
5987824 their will be longer chapters and thanks for your thought