The new Equestria.

by Meow Te-Sung

Chapter 1

Comrades, I want to appolagize for any grammer errors or spelling mistakes, english is not my best langueage so please expect a good deal of mistakes. Thank You -Comrade Stalin

Pinkie Pie awoke to the usual ring of her state issued alarm clock. Every day scince Celestia made those reforms to the Equestrian government She had to get up at 5:30 every day including weekends, and start baking bread, all day, every day. She looked at her alarm clock, it was dull and iron, no color or decorations on it at all, it didn't even have a switch to change the alarm. But it did, however, have a sensor in it that would alert Delestia's KGB if it was tampered with in any way and she would get sent to the Gulag.

She walked down stairs and pushed the button that had been recently installed into the Bakery's wall. It had a metal plate, with a single green button for every adult pony in the resedince. Pinkie quickly pressed the middle button, every night she went to sleep in fear of oversleeping, and pressing her button late. She knew if she did that the doors and windows would automaticlly lock and alert the KGB, who would then barge into her home and arrest her for being a lazy traitor.

She noticed that Mr. and Mrs.Cake were walking down the stairs, Pinkie kept on walking over to the refridgerator to get her daily breakfast ration of oatmeal, coffe, and apples. She hated oatmeal, she hated it with all her heart, but she was so hungry it didn't matter to her anymore, and besides, if she didn't eat it she would be arrested for wasting the fruit of her comrades labor, as the KGB put it.

She sat down at the table to begin eating makeing sure that the state installed security cameras could see her for the rest of her morning ritual. The cameras were clearly visible and were installed in every room of everyponies house on the second week of Celestia's reforms. Along with the cameras, the govvernment had installed wiretaps, intercoms, and automatic locks, that lock the ponies in their rooms after curfew. Mrs. Cake got back inside from giving her foals to the government shuttle that would take them to their schools when all three of the residents herd the familer beeping, signalling the morning anouncements.

"Good morning comerades." the host said in a toneless, cold voice. "Please rise to salute our grand utopian motherland!" He said. Pinkie and the Cakes sang along to the Equestrian national anthem as it was played twice by the KGB over the radio. Afterwards the anouncer sharply said "Get to work!" and then hung up the intercomm.

The Cakes and Pinkie got to their positions and began the endless process of making bread, since the reforms Celestia imposed had started. About two hours later there was a knock on the door. Before one of them could answer it three members of Celestia's KGB royal guard walked in. Their armor was the same as before the reforms, but it was now colorless, just a dull, steel.

The three unicorns stood in front of the frietend family and one pulled out a note and began reading aloud.

"Mr.Carrot Cake, You have been charged with the high treason of glutony, we have video evidence of you stealing bread from the supply that you have made. You have been sentenced to life in the Gulag." The guards then circled Mr. Cake.

"I'll never go with you!" Mr. Cake shouted. The guards just shrugged and the middle one said "Suit yourself." and then all three of them lowerd their horns and started sending spells flying at Mr.Cake.

The spells hit Carrot like bullets and before long he hit the floor, dead and full of holes. The agent in charge said to the intercom "We need a clean up crew." and started to leave, and before walking out, the middle agent turned and said "Your quota is still five hundred loaves a day." and then they left.

Pinkie and Mrs. Came got back to work making bread, crying the entire time, their tears dripping into the dough. The bread would taste even worse now because of all the salty tears being added to them, along with the course grain that the government made them use.

They continued making bread untill 10:00 at night, when they were permitted to eat dinner. They went to the refridgerator and got their daily dinner ration, a salad and bread. Before they ate the loud speakers came on and they had to stand up and say "Thank you comrade Celestia for this happy life." and then had to sing the Equestrian national anthem twice again.

They then ate in scilence, one reason being they had nothing to talk about, the other being they could be deemed traitorous for the slightest complaint against their life. After they had fineshed eating they went up stairs and went strait to bed. They did not bath for running water for anything other than drinking and for work was considered greedy and wasteful, and punishable by up to 15 to 20 years of hard labor in the Gulag.

They retired to their respective quarters for the night, and Pinkie herd the familer sound of the doors and windoes locking automaticly. She tried to sleep, but it was very hard for her, on account of the camera watching her every move. She wished Gummy was here with her, she started crying as she remembered what had happend to her lovable pet alligator.

A few days after the reforms the KGB came into her house for the weekly inspection and found Gummy. He was sitting in the closet chewing on something. Even though pets are still allowed in Equestria, when they retrived Gummy, they saw he had been chewing on Celestia's editin of the Communist manifesto.

Even though Pikie did't like her life, the brainwashing worked, and she lved her country, and this treason broke her heart. She didn't even try to resis as the KGB took put a sack over Gummy's head and the executed him by shoting him with a spell in the back of the head.

Pinkie was snapped out of her memory by the intercom in her room blaring "Comrade Pinkie, stop crying and go to sleep!" Pinkie just nodded and said "Yes Comrade." and laid her head down and fell asleep like the good pony she is.

Comments

[Wilhelm]

Mistakes:
"Pinkie Pie awoke to the usual ring of her state issued alarm clock. Every day scince Celestia made those reforms to the Equestrian government She had"
she, not She.
" she lved her country"
Loved not lved
"Even though Pikie did't like her life, the brainwashing worked, and she lved her country, and this treason broke her heart. She didn't even try to resis as the KGB took put a sack over Gummy's head and the executed him by shoting him with a spell in the back of the head."
You just copied this:

>soviet Russia
>KGB are making door to door stops to check for traitor capitalists
>they come to your home
>you are reading Marx like a good citizen
>they inquire about your fluffy pony
>you say she is in her play pen, reading Marx like a good communist pony
>you lead them to her
>fluffy pony is in her crib, gazing up at you and babbling happily
>fluffy pony’s copy of Marx is ripped up
>she was eating it
>her treachery breaks your heart
>the KGB put black sack over fluffy pony’s head
>fluffy pony thinks it’s a game
>fluffy pony is taken out into cold Russian snow
>KGB execute fluffy pony
>long live mother Russia

That is all.
Good day.

[the best pony]

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[the best pony]

AMERICA IS BETTER

[Meow Te-Sung]

379249 Like I said, my english sucks and yes, my inspiration for Gummy's part was inspired by mrhappyface's blog post.

[Wilhelm]

379260
I see.
And he just stole it from the tumblr.
Good day.

[EOM_gamzee]

TBP, yes I agree, but I don't shove it in other faces.

I sense a Half Life plot coming up. FOLLOW FREEPONY!

[Meow Te-Sung]

379257 Ah, yes, because a legion of fat, ignorent dumb asses are so much better than the country who put the first man in space.

[Rust]

That was delightfully depressing. I'm going to go outside and watch the happy little birds frolic in the air whilst I contemplate putting a bullet through my brain with the nearest twelve-gauge.

For the glory of Soviet Russia, comrade Stalin. Yay.

[Wilhelm]

379281
(Using stolen german tech)
Also they put a man on the moon.
379257
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Good day.

[Meow Te-Sung]

379284 Finally, Someone who dosn't desearve to be sent to the gulag. Good Day Comrade

[Meow Te-Sung]

379290 You did not put a an on the moon. also, Hitler just copied Alien technology.

[Wilhelm]

379293
No the yanks did.
Nazi ufo's really?
Like this?
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Good day.

[Meow Te-Sung]

379307 THey found a nazi scientist's journal that said "We were help by beings from another planet."

[Wilhelm]

379312
When, where and where is your source?
Also you do know how crazy you sound, right?
If UFO's were on his side, why did he lose?
Good day.

[the best pony]

379281 well you may have put a man in space first but the US is still a country where people have rights and not a country that no longer exists
come at me

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[Meow Te-Sung]

379318 I never said they were on his side, I'm saying one my have crash landed in Nazi Germany. My source, the history channel. And yes, I know I'm crazy, you would be to if your wife died in your arms, and your second wife shot herself. And your only son sucked.

[Wilhelm]

379366
Didn't he get captured by the Germans?
And when asked to trade fro him you refused and then he ran into a eletric barbed wire fence.
And I don't believe anything that the History channels says about aliens, that crazy guy with weird hair seems to be high.
Good day.

[the best pony]

379290
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[Wilhelm]

379383
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Good day.

[the best pony]

379398 no i'll never join you, you killed my father

[Bronio Kröger]

YOU ARE BEING REPORTED TO THOUGHT POLICE FOR NOT NAMINK ROYAL COMRADINAS

COMRADE STALLESTIA

AND

COMRADE LUNIN

YOU ARE GIVEN PASS ON TROT-SKY JOKE SINCE MAKES ITSELF

NO EXTRA CREDIT BEINK GIVEN SINCE YOU NO MAKINK PUNS GORBACHOOF, PINKO PIE OR AEROFLOTTERSHY

[Meow Te-Sung]

379381 1) yes that was my son, and I hated him. 2) It wasn't off of Ancient aliens it was some other documentery.

[Wilhelm]

379882
I see...
Like the reported crash in the Black Forest?
Good day.

[Meow Te-Sung]

382179 Yes. Although rosewell was faked. By me, lol.

[Wilhelm]

382598
Nope.
Good day.

[Ducreux'ed]

This was simply glorious.
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In soviet Russia, law breaks you!
Glory to the motherland.

[Ernest Goes To Camp!]

Americans are so annoying.

[Fiddlebottoms]

I cannot fully embrace this story, comrade. The appearance of Unicorns without adequate controllers or restraints to keep them in check with the will of the people ...
It is most troubling.

[Meow Te-Sung]

1441986 the use of brainwashing to controll the populace is much more efficient,the use of control boxes will give the Unicorns a false sense of freedom and thus work more efficiantly, also, Unicorns with the box would make poor soilders. And this was writen bofore the concept wa even created so I didn't kow such things existed.

[Rask]

Still get a laugh reading this story.

[Tiber Septim II]

Why haven’t you continued adding more chapters?