"Umm...Hi..." Trixie whispered.
"Oh, hello." Fluttershy replied, rivaling her tone.
You see my readers, when Fluttershy and Trixie first met, they obviously had much to say.
Trixie had just seen Twilight jump behind the Sugarcube Corner's Counter, Applejack and Rarity bother jumped there with her. Trixie saw where this was going. Maybe Twilight would see how she didn't deserve to be here, After all, she did treat them horribly in the past. Trying to hide behind her mane, she tried to shy away from the party, maybe grab an apple, and try and move to the next town.
"So! Are you enjoying your party? Are you? Please? Because I really hope you are but that look on your face is a frowny-wowny face and we just have to turn that upside down...unless..." The Pink One's mane started to deflate. "You...don't like it?"
"N-no! I-I m-mean yes...n-no I-I..." Trixie looked confused again, and took a deep breath. " Thank you for the party, but i just don't feel...right."
Pinkie re-inflated. She grinned. "NONSENSE!" She put a cupcake in Trixie's mouth. and Bounded around. Then she started to sing...
"Trixie, you look quite down. With your big sad eyes, and your big fat frown.
...The world doesn't have to be so grey! Trixie, when you're life's a mess, When you're feeling blue, always in distress, I know what can wash that sad away.
All you have to do is; Put a fresh cupcakes in you're ear!
(Cupcakes in my ear?) Trixie said
Put a fresh baked cupcake right into your favourite ear. It's true.
(Says who?)
So true. Once it's in your gloom will disappear. The bad in the world is hard to hear, When in your ear a fresh cupcake cheers, So go and put a fresh cupcake in your ear! Put a fresh cupcake in your ear!
(I'd rather keep my ear clear.) Trixie muttered. Even remorseful, she isn't all muffins and cupcakes.
You will never be happy if you live your life in fear. It's true
(s-says you.)
So true, When it's in the skies are bright and clear. Oh every day of every year, The sun shines bright on this big blue sphere, So go and put a fresh cupcake in your ear![1] BOOM!!
(Oh my Celestia, did she just...a confetti/balloon cannon? Isn't that dangerous!?)
"Umm..." was all Trixie had to say.
"Oh don't mind Pinkie," Fluttershy started. She's just excited and doesn't want anyone to frown...you should have seen Cranky..."
"B-but I still don't get it...Why are you guys...nice? Kind? Throwing me a party even though I humiliated your friends? Trixie was still confused. She was suprised Twilight would accept her, but Fluttershy and Pinkie? It was like the story, How the Grinchpony Stole Hearts Warming Day. Her little Pony heart grew three times that party.
"This feels like a dream..." Trixie said, " I never would have thought that Twilight, the one I considered to be my rival, would...be my mother" Trixie squealed, emphasizing 'mother.' She then blushed.
"Yes, I was surprised too." Fluttershy whispered. " But if you ever want a quiet place drink tea, I'll be at my cottage. I can forgive you for being a little braggy, after all, one time Applejack bragged how she could buck all the apples in her farm, and Rainbow is always bragging about her flying. But its ok, because people learn from there mistakes, right?"
Had anypony else said that, the correspondent might have been upset, but Fluttershy put it in such a way, that, Trixie felt accepted.
"Thank you," She paused to hug Fluttershy. They both blushed. "Thank you so much..."
"AND THAT'S HOW EQUESTRIA WAS MADE!!" Pinkie Shouted.
"Yeah..." Trixie smiled, as she gave Pinkie a hug too.
The party continued. Fluttershy and Trixie didn't talk much for the rest of the time, Fluttershy's shyness getting in the way, and Trixie's overly done remorse. Nothing could go wrong.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!?"
Guys, if you see any errors, in my defense, I did this in my small pockets of spare time. I'm not doing the best in school, and I'm doing this in complete secret. Oh, and By the way, I just wanted to put this here. I Call Patent on this idea. Personally, I just don't have many of my own ideas, and i'm very proud of the fact that I had this idea, so PLEASE don't take this from me,
Thank you guys so much, I'm also open to suggestions in the comments! i think one of the best parts of the Brony Community is that i have not seen a single troll, and just about every comment i have ever read on this site was fair. thank you guys!!
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I just remembered to tell you this. I know they are stubborn. But Rarity is a good actress and Applejack promised to give her a chance. She didn't say how patient she had to be with Trixie. (COUGH COUGH FORESHADOWING COUGH COUGH))
:)
I guess I know how you feel. My mom knows I am a brony but my dad would probably not accept this. School also is a bit difficult for me, but don't worry, your writing makes me smile. So yeah. Um. Im not sure if this was inspirational or corny... You dont need to reply jf you dont want to.
love this keep it up man
Thank you so much!!! I love this story and have been waiting so long for it to be continued.THanks you
p.s Love pinkie pies song
Alright Guys, My parents have been somewhat lax this weekend,(meaning the left me at the house alone with internet access) but i am here to say this
1. I am glad i got comments, thank you, NLRsoldier, Grey Warden, and Irateam.
2. Please request how you want me to continue this, I plan on doing this for a LONG time, and i need all the ideas i can get, but be warned, I have a very specific writing style.
3. Long live Charlie the Unicorn. As Long as he doesn't die from Kidney Failure, as he is lacking (YAY MORBID HUMOR!!!)
When reading that song pinkie sung, for some reason I couldn't help thinking about the A Very Happy Unbirthday song from Disney's cartoon Alice in wonderland. yeah, anypony aside from me hate that we now have to make that distinction?