Mi favurite poni is twilight sparkl i luv her very much and so do all mi ocs. if u dont like it den skrew off
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Star Shadow Thunder is an alicorn who must go on an adventure to save the Princesses from Discord and Chrysalis and Sombra.
Along the way, he will encounter many dangers, but his special and mysterious powers will save him from destruction.
This is my first story ever. I hope you enjoy it.
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What the fuck is wrong with his forelegs and hindlegs?
*Sees title*
*Quietly shimmies away*
By the way, his body looks broken...just a bit
dat pic cannot be unintentional @_@
I'm calling dibs on the Rage Review
Nope.
I read the first few words and quickly noped out of here.
Please tell me this story was supposed to be crap?
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Not going to waste time on a blatantly obvious troll.
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Yes, three nope gifs are necessary for the nope that is happening right now.
Brilliantly awful. Thank you for adding to the already growing pile of junk. At least we know you're not serious!
Brilliantly awful. Thank you for adding to the already growing pile of junk. At least we know you're not serious!
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all of you people are beeng mean to me. i tried really hard and your not even giving me tips on how to do better. your just calling me a 'troll' and i dont even now what tat is.
Wait...
Is this actually not a troll fic?
This IS actually your first story...
Wow
Wow... I left this story for two seconds to check something out. I come back and it already has even more dislikes.
Please for the love of God fix that retarded pony's legs. I can't look at it without fucking laughing and I feel bad for doing so.
4068557
lol
4068586
The cover art is a dead giveaway, but you're free to play innocent all you want.
I can't decide which hind leg is more fucked up
4068586
>kills Spike and brings him back
>nobody cares
>kills Applejack and Rainbow Dash says it's okay because she was a bitch anyway
Uh huh totally not trolling.
4068586
I apologize right now before you even say anything to me. I'm sincerely sorry. I shouldn't have said anything.
The reason they're calling you a troll is because of how overdone your OC is. I haven't gotten to pass the first paragraph because it's been done so many times before. I'm not trying to be mean either. It's just a fact. I do apologize for my comments though.
Troll: One who posts a deliberately provocative message to a newsgroup or message board with the intention of causing maximum disruption and argument
4068586 Either take it down or delete it. I won't mention everything that has to be fixed because I would be here all day. Just...remove this abomination. Then again, I guess we need shit like this to appreciate the half decent stuff.
I turned away for two seconds. All I have to say now is who the fuck liked this?
Considering I run a group all about OCs and have seen some DAMN bad OCs come through along with very obvious Mary Sues, congratulations, you are the first that made me actually want to tear my eyes away from what I was reading.
>DAT COVER ART.
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Oh, well that bodes well doesn't it?
Why is spell check so foreign to people? It's practically built right in to basically every browser now.
I actually read this and my fourth comment will be the final one I put on this story.
You just fucking took out two of the main characters of MLP: FiM within 10 seconds of reading.
They didn't even do anything! Just "she was an earth pony so I killed her." Everyone else couldn't be any fuckin' happier! "She was a bitch anyway"
...
Really?
Oh, and Spike blew up too. But got put back together in a few seconds. Twilight, who is essentially his mother/sister, gave an absolute amount of 0 fucks when her adopted son/brother just fucking exploded.
I'm done. I'll have to agree that you're a troll.
4068599 ill fix the fucking image if it will make you stop acussing me of being a 'troll'
For fuck sake, are there no original trolls anymore? All people like you do is copy the same type of shit over and over again.
Ok... This story...
Wait... Let me take my rage on a chimera...
Ok I'm back...
Let's do this.
Oh a disclaimer if you decide to talk back. I am here to help not hurt but if you dont see it that way then I will hurt... One and only warning...
First of all the grammar and spelling errors are way too high...
You said you booted your first editor. Well you might of needed him... Like now.
The way this story was written was atrocious and just made me uncomfortable all the way.
Your OC just goes out there to kill and marry twilight.. What?
This message is bad in itself but really ... These characters are way too OOC for their own good.
Your OC was conceptually flawed by a long shot here.
He's bland and violent ... For real.
And also using pony creator doesn't cut it here. This wasn't a great idea because people on this site check out these things with disgust.
The concept has been done millions of times already and the OC too...
This story was bad... I don't usually say this but my advise is to completely redo all of this madness I see before me and do it for your own good.
This site is for well done stories not a story to wish fulfill your personal fantasy. And in fact this is why this site is so critical of stories in the first place... Because of stories like this...
I will not down vote here because I don't want to.
You sir have to really see your own work and judge it and quickly decide what route you have to take here.
Anyways brohoof and hopefully this story will get fixed ..
Oh and to add.. I don't think you're a troll... I can tell that you really meant to write this...
Dis fic gave me diabeetus.
4068700 That's because you are a troll.
These comments are really funny
And you just know there'll be that one like because the person feels bad for this dude.
This story is too ogrebearing.
4068700
Shouldn't have needed fixing because anyone sensible wouldn't have put that up anyway, no cover art would be better.
4068593 No, it's a troll fic.
4068703 knowing today's kids... I can see him not being a troll... More like a psychotic like person who writes to self fulfill a sexual fantasy... Kids these days...
4068738 knowing today's kids... I can see him not being a troll... More like a psychotic like person who writes to self fulfill a sexual fantasy... Kids these days... Like I said to berry punch...
4068741 I would really hope not... then again if he is legit, he's probably a CoD kid. But I am betting on this being a terrible trollfic.
4068742 This.
4068599 its gone now. are you happy? i have a really sucky com puter and it made the pic weird. it wasnt mi fault.
4068755 Damn kiddies on fimfiction
4068586 Black and red alicorn OC! You already get a downvote! This is taboo on Fimfiction. Just no.
4068732
Dude, I feel bad. I can't tell whether this guy is a troll or not. If it's a harmless little 8 year old then I believe I'm going to Hell. I'm kind of hard pressed to believe he's a troll due to the fact that SPIKE FUCKING EXPLODED!!
What in the ever-living fuck was going on in the author's head?
Even if someone feels bad, a story like this should be condemned and cast to the unholy fires of Hell for all eternity.
No one on this planet should like this story. At least, thumbs up wise. If they like it then that's their prerogative.
who would like dis?
4068772 have you read my review... even though it was half drunk written because i am half drunk ... just read it plz....
4068772 Damn, you are a really fucking terrible troll.
4068772 Your computer has nothing to do with how you see the image, you know that right?
4068778 yes a taboo if you post a pic...
4068755 By the way I like your avatar
4068763 i usually dont ... i have seen the internet and enough in psychology to see where this is going
4068764 This fic broke my spirit