Time to introduce Oliver’s power!
Though only one bit at a time. It’ll be up to you to guess just what Alicorn he is to be.
Begin!
Planning With A Dash Of Tickles
“Once more mon amour.”
“Seriously? We’ve been at this for forty minutes.”
“Oui, now again!”
“Slavedriver.”
It was a very dreary evening in the castle of Canterlot. The Stormtroppers were about as dull as per usual, Sunny Butt was still trolling around with that serene smile, and the Blue menace (Otherwise known as Mom) had left my cheeks nice raw with kisses, nuzzles and the lot earlier that day.
The tingling had yet to wear off.
Oh, and Fleur Delacour-Ahem-De Lis was at that moment in time torturing my mind with our…special lessons.
Get your minds outta the gutter, my body WAS a child’s.
Though the increasingly familiar sensation of smooth lips pressing against my own does grant you some leeway.
So chuck your minds back in!
Fleur pulled back and gazed at me warmly, that annoying you know you’re going to listen to me anyway grin firmly plastered on her muzzle.
“Pervert,” I teased, prompting a rather swift look of mock indignation to flicker across her face.
“Moi?” she gasped, putting a hoof to her head dramatically and falling back on our humungous cushion. “You wound me, mon cheri! To suggest that a mare as pure as I would take up the mantle of pervert. Atrocious!”
I couldn’t help the sheer level of laughter that broke free of the confines of my muzzle, held tightly shut though it was. Although given that Fleur was laughing in her own unique, musical way. I suppose my sudden lapse without Mom being responsible wasn’t so bad.
“Oliver,” she chuckled. “My Oliver. We both know how old you truly are. Just as we both know how old I truly am. So is there really a need to joke about such a thing?”
She wasn’t kidding either. For although she chose not to admit her age aloud (Fleur calls it a mare thing), I feel safe enough to reveal that she is many centuries my senior.
Sirens live a bloody long time.
Bloody…Hah! Mental note number twenty one- The word ‘bloody’ does not seem to count as a swear word. It may now be added alongside the others’.
…Don’t judge me; it’s how I keep track of things.
“I suppose not,” I sighed, grinning somewhat tiredly up at the pale mare. “Tis a bit amusing though, no?”
“No,” she deadpanned, though her smile contradicted this. “Now...shall we continue?”
One day a guy like me will win an argument with a female.
Never the less, I nodded and looked directly at her eyes, scrunching my brow in concentration. It took a few seconds less for the effects to become apparent. First there was a slight tingling within my eyes, not uncomfortable, just sort of there. Secondly a sort of glow took over Fleur’s, an intense red. The one an individual might call evil, though we both scoffed at the notion.
How could something like this be even the slightest bit malicious?
Because…it came. The chanting, a melodious chanting. The words were spoken in a language unfamiliar to me, yet all the same I still retained perfect understanding of what they meant.
Open the door. Let us in. Let us see. Let us know all. Open the door. Let us in. Let us…
A repeating symphony of words, clearly feminine. Repeating over and over, enough to drive one mind. But they never did. How could they?
It was wonderful.
And the power. The sheer unrivalled sensation of utter dominance was almost overwhelming. It was why I had to practise, why Fleur had suggested I do so with her as a guinea pig no matter my refusal.
I didn’t even know I had this ability until she sensed it within me. To be honest I don’t really like to talk about it, even if it does make me feel good, warm. I’m not foolish enough to believe that there’ll be no side effects.
I’ve studied addiction before after all. But if Fleur believes that I can overcome it, then overcome it I shall!
Still, that’s the reason I never mentioned it before. To be honest…I don’t particularly want to think about it.
“Focus mon amour,” Fleur soothed, obviously able to sense my distracted mind. “I welcome you, enter my darling. Enter and see all you wish to see.”
Let us in. Let us see.
“Yes my love, see all you all wish to see.”
Open the door.
“It is always open for you, enter. Come, don’t be nervous, be confident. You must be confident for this to work.”
I gritted my teeth and forced myself to ignore the utter pleasure I felt, pushing it to the further most corner of my mind.
Let us know all
“You shall, you can! Come my love, come in, I invite you willingly.”
…
“The door is open. We see all. We know all. We own all.”
…
It was a very exhausting hour later that I finally closed my eyes, the light linking us together fading just as quickly.
“Well done, mon amour,” cooed a very lovely voice. “We are one step closer to obtaining our goal, and I am so proud of you. But remember…you must play the child if it is to come to pass.”
A deep but short kiss followed her praise, causing me to sigh and open my eyes…only to see that my ‘Royal Foalsitter’ was nowhere to be found.
I hate it when she does that…and she probably knows it.
The sound (and earth-shaking vibrations) of the chamber door being opened quickly snapped me out of my thoughts and onto…
“The Blue Menace has returned!” I squeaked loudly, choosing that very moment to dive under the bed. “Quick! Call the police! Call Professor Oak, we haven’t caught em’ all!”
A melodious yet still rather boisterous chuckle escaped the dastardly villain, no doubt finding my cries for help to be trivial and in vain as she closed in on my naive hiding spot. Her horn flashed once, taking every piece of regalia along with it.
Wait for it, here comes the villainous monologue.
“Nay foal! No help shall save thee from thy punishment!” she shouted, laughing maliciously. “Thou hast dared to defy the great Blue Menace! And whilst under our hoof and our unquestionable rule, defiance will not…”
Wait, what is she-
Without any warning, she dropped to her belly and pulled me from under the bed, holding me in front of her twinkling eyes.
“BE TOLERATED!” she shouted, her hooves, muzzle and even mane tickling me mercilessly.
“Mercy! Merc-c-cy!” I cried, laughing uncontrollably as I tried unsuccessfully to escape her evil embrace.
“Never!” she cackled, blowing on my belly soon after and causing me to squeal like a…well, child. “Thou shalt pay for crossing the Blue Menace!”
She didn’t stop for at least a thousand years…or maybe a few minutes. It was difficult to tell the difference in the end. Once she did so however, to my great relief, it was only for me to realize just what else was about to happen.
How did I know?
She had the grin. The grin that told me in no uncertain terms just what was about to happen to me.
And that I had no say in the matter…again.
“Mine sweet baby,” she cooed lovingly. “Mine most adorable child, it is time once again.”
“No!” I defied, stubbornly trying to wiggle out of her hold. “I don’t need one! Let me go!”
It was to my utmost surprise that she did not both tighten her hold on me and yell out her enthusiastic refusals. In fact if I didn’t know any better than I would have said that she was actually considering what I had to say.
Until she let me go and I landed in a shallow pool of water that is.
Faust damnit.
I was quickly picked back up out of the water, only to blink the suds away and take in the appearance of a completely soaked Mom.
A completely soaked Mom with a rather evil looking scrubbing brush in her mouth.
“Sthy sthill now baby,” she slurred behind the brush. “Mhommy’s going to mhake thee nhice and shiny!”
“Noooo!”
I tried to run but it was no use, she caught me.
And thus the scrubbing began.
Only the dead can know peace from this torment!
I WANT OFF MR BONES WILD RIDE I WANT OFF MR BONES WILD RIDE I WANT OFF MR BONES WILD RIDE I WANT OFF MR BONES WILD RIDE I WANT OFF MR BONES WILD RIDE I WANT OFF MR BONES WILD RIDE
Professor Oak? Perhaps a Pokémon reference? You know, the "we haven’t caught em’ all!" is enough proof, great story, keep it up!
May you be snugly in peace! Thanks for the chapter update =D, also it seems that his other personality has subsided as he has finally given Into his instincts of luna being his mother. Though I wonder if we ever will know what luna did that first time they slept together as mother and child. Was it from magic or "bond" she did or cause of his new body requiring a parent
thanks for the update!!
So what is his power again? and Luna is great in this series.
I saw the princesses in the cover art, then read the summary. I said, "Ohhh... this is going to be fun."
Good job
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Damn, thought this was gonna be like "Oh to be Old Again". I guess I wasn't wrong, it just isn't a serious take on it.
Oh well...I'm not gonna say this is badly written, 'cuz it's actually very well written, just...not quite what I was looking for.
No fave, but I'll give an upvote for the skilled writing.
(Huh, mine is the 1,300th upvote...)
Love the Harry Potter reference! Fleur-de-Lis does kinda sound like the half-veela. But, DAYUM, Fleur is old!
4663694 I probably laughed at that more than I should have. By the time I was done laughing I had tears streaming down my face.
Aww she's just giving you a bath.
Cmon Oliver. Let them in. Open the door, get on the floor, everybody do the dinosaur...
Fucking damn it, this place is getting to me.
Oh oh oh is his power summoning demons or dead people?
ADORABLE!
Man I enjoy every chapter. This story is funny as hell
Interesting power... whatever it is. I'm assuming that this power is something to do with willpower? Great chapter, it opens new doors and windows for the story to possibly go through, and it shows how our small blue protagonist is developing and adapting to his current state and surroundings. Great work!
So this is where the dark comes in hu.
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I do like these little moments between Luna and Oliver. But seriously, why don't you go ahead and put the romance tag in already?
Get on the floor. Everybody do the dinosaur.
my cries for help to be trivial and in vain
Well, I have no idea what his power is, so I'm not even going to try and guess.
With "torment", does he means being an alicorn baby, adopted by a very motherly (and badass) Luna and having a hot immortal girlfriend? for some reason I don´t pity him.
Wish there was more to read...
And please forgive me as it's early in the morning, SPOILER ALERT?
what power were they walking about?
You're still writing!
I thought it was going to be the last chapter- glad it isn't! I WUB DIS STORY!!!!
some say that the scrubbing is so powerful that it touches your soul... and leaves it squeacky clean.
4664860 Warframe Pony!!!!!!!
HARRY POTTER REFERENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anybody know of other stories where a human wakes as a young alicorn?
Sure buddy, you just keep telling yourself that.
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MY SANITY CANNOT HANDLE IT ALL!!!
No more.... Please... No more.......
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And the female is luna...
Also, does anyone know of any other really good fics like this one here.
I need moar.
So if I am to understand, fluer is trying to teach Oliver resistance magic as a defense, even though she is full of a darker magic?
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Well it was more her course of action I considered overkill, not the fact that she did it.
Luna demi-goddess
Open the door?
...
The door is open.
4684428 then come the darkness that will shadow all no lite shale escape the coming onslaught this planet will bathe in blood
4669771 Royal Rebirth: Life and times of prince Dusk Star
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Discord and Tia are probably way older.
4699857 Yea, verily!
this is one of the best storys i have read online but i can see why it has a couple of dislikes and that is because it takes a while for the chapers to come out but i still love the story and i think the chapters are worth the wait unless they are short chapter but still love it
Can't wait for a new chapter this story is cute and hilarious! Plz update soon.
Call Professor Oak caused me to LOL all around the room .
Well it's nice to see them getting along. Also, I'm guessing he'll have one sort of mental power? Mind reading maybe???
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Because it really isn't a major thing in this story.
The random, over the top comedy is!
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I guess it makes sense, if that's the case than can you tone down the romance please.
And speaking of random, it took you 3 weeks for you to respond.
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I try to read all my comments, but sometimes I get so many that they overlap each other and I miss a few.
Also, no. The romance is minor but will still be a..hmm, sort of major but not overwhelming part of the second arc. With that being said, better get on with it then!
Eh
Oh Lawdy, I died.
4795219 Hmm............*Thinks for a bit*
Lolnope/never
>Ecocat<
4822984 I gotta find what that short is called...