in the dark of the night a small moaning can be heard through out the castle and young princess luna decides to investigate although what she finds is something that will change her forever
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i enjoy righting fan fictions but never had anywhere to show my work
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U didn't even say what they were doing
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This story.
THIS
STORY.
Isn't very good.
4055964
Things like this are why I read comment sections, thanks for the laugh.
4055964 thanks for the honesty i will attempt to improve the later chapters
4054959 ... what ever do you mean please elaborate
4058359 what Celestia was doing in her "Private time" and what Luna did with the ropes and chains
4058489 it was supposed to be implied that she was doing some snm stuff whiping and other stuff like that i don't necessarily understand much of that stuff as i am only 15
4058621 dude I'm 13
4058709 ... get out
4069396 lol
4074937 no really you shouldn't be here your only an innocent child and i dont want your brain to be corrupted
4088448 dude my brain has been getting corrupted more and more since third grade their isn't much more u can do to worsen it
4088460 just wait for chapter two im telling you that-ll be sooooooo much worse like rape and molesting level horror of involentary sex
4088571 dude thts nothing
4088614 OH YES IT IS YOU'LL SEE SOON
4088621 I'm waiting and I'm ready
4088625 i hope your body is too
4088629 u can't discourage me
4088634 but i sure as hell can try
4088637 no u cant
4088681 try and stop me
4088709 there is no point
4088821 you will give in to my sexy story
4088941 u wish pervo boy
4089100 im a girl ass hat
4090818 lol
4088571
I don't see a chapter 2.
4090818
4189730 well as you can see it is on hiatus while i ether do some "research" or find a new writer please stand by while i get on to it i am currently working on an angle fan fic (non sexual) that will fill the gap
4204662
I look forward to the next chapter whenever it does come out.
4215995 great to hear im searching vigorously for a new writer
4189730 this video was my basic reaction while trying to get my teacher to proof read this
4223472
What, you're not a good enough writer?
4468360
Yeah, best reaction video ever.
4469583 as said previously (on dragon ball z) im only fifteen and actualy suck at writing soooooo yeah
4472383
Hey, that doesn't mean stop writing! That means continue writing so you get better.
4472392 oh.... thank you
4473171
So, when should we be expecting the new chapter of this, hmm?
4473208 i am working on the story myself as i have failed to find a new writer i appreciate the support youve given me
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>my reaction upon being thanked for supporting you
4474333 OOOOOOOOH I THINK I LOVE YOU.... (not really but you are very kind to complement my horrible writing skills that pay no bills)
4477435
I read all 1114 words of your fic so far. You're doing something right, in my books.
4477471 well... my teacher therapist and piers would beg to differ
4477510
They're all silly. They don't read these amazing fanfics and enjoy them, do they?
This actually isn't that bad at all only thing I see are technical mess ups, but don't worry everyone gets hounded about those. Keep going I actually wanna see how this turns out
Pog champ