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HolyJunkie


I'm HolyJunkie. If I believed in reincarnation, I'd probably be of the same kind of mentality as Philip K. Dick. Seriously, the dude speaks to my soul, man. Like... duuuuude.

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NOTE: I wrote this prior to the episode "Luna Eclipsed". However, her non-shouting voice can be easily explained by saying "That's her public voice, not the Black Ops quietness" voice"

Kurt Foalington was the middle child of a rather successful family in Canterlot. In a peaceful society, he was the proverbial black sheep. He loved the fray, and most ponies with power didn't like having a threat to their otherwise peaceful society.

Things get really messy when he figures out that society had set up a cleverly-designed prison, and he wanted to meet a young filly.

Then it gets even messier when his younger brother goes missing.

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An alternate world where society isn't perfect, and it's not the only one in general. Events are otherwise the same in the show.

OC-centered, with canon cast appearing at points, so I guess that's something for those of you who foolishly exclusively turn your interest towards everything that, for all you know, gets the canon completely wrong.

[Yeah, I'm a bit of a bitter guy towards people who dismiss entire fics just because it has an OC in there somewhere.]

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 8 )

have to say i remember reading this on Eq a wile back ait about killed me when it never updated again heres hopeful Kurt returns after his final battle........also curse my brain for remembering every story ive ever read although im looking forward to this one :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:
p.s. its 3:42 AM here im not sure how steady my typing is right now :derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

A bit short on comments, aintcha Holy?

For those that read through the comments to get a bit of an idea on whether it's worth it to read, I'm going to have to say it is worth your time.

25716 Might want to check out "Deconstruction" if you're wanting more Kurt.

#4 · Jan 14th, 2012 · · · Part 6 ·

Wow this seems a lot like the pony version of Graceling... well the fighting cutie mark thing does... but really great story... but it needs a sequel... maybe one where Kurt returns to ponyville and has a romance with twilight... anyway... great job...

And also... I agree with Jace, this is DEFINITELY worth reading.

Sorry to say but I didn't like characterization of Kurt and the boss fight wasn't very good.

Nothing ever happened at Canterlot.

Nothing ever will.

Yeah...no. You left at the very moment that celestia was kidnapped, didnt you?

You shoud totally write a sequel or something. This was awesome

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