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Ferntail12


Pegasister from Illinois, 3-year Science Olympiad participant

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Bluesong, an alicorn learning magic at Princess Twilight's School for Gifted Ponies, falls in love with her Science Olympiad coach, Nicole, but she doesn't seem to love Bluesong back, even though she really does. Just after they confess their love for each other, tragedy strikes, leaving the fate of this lovestruck couple hanging in the balance. Only time will tell if this romance is doomed, or will survive the many hardships that Faust had thrown at them.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

I already see and handful of mistakes at first glance for this story.

Bluesong, an alicorn learning magic at Princess Twilight's School for Gifted Ponies,

Bluesong, an alicorn

Alicorn oc? No. Just, Don't do this stuff.

But, Nicole doesn't seem to love Bluesong back. Just after they confess their love for each other

Wait, Nicole doesn't love Bluesong, but They confess their love for eachother?
Does he love Blue or not?

The story Cover is a heart made of images of the ocs... Made in pony creator.

So uh... Read later, but no like for now.

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1. Fixed the description-thanks! :pinkiesmile:

2. Alicorn OC's- I like them...:fluttershysad:

3. The cover is the only thing I could think of...

4. Sorry if you don't like it, it's my first try at an OC story:derpytongue2:

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Alicorn Ocs are usually overpowered characters. Alicorns are so special because there's only four of them, Only two of them having been born alicorns. If there were as many alicorns as there are unicorns or pegasai, they would no longer be as important. Also, alicorns can do things like control the sun.
Thus why I don't like alicorn ocs.:twistnerd:

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