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DirtyMind


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When do we get to the sex scene and how do we know which chapter is one

4086374 The first clop chapter won't be for a little while since this is more about the story then it is the clop. I will let you know which chapters has sex scenes in it by putting clop or mature only next to the chapter number.

so, this says that it's been cancelled, but are you really cancelling it? i really liked this story, so i'm kind of hoping this is just a rewrite kinda thing or something.

4754078 Wow. I didnt expect to get a message like that. Part of why I canceled the story is because of the fact that it would require a rewrite(more so in my head then in the story) because I had planned on removing the clop element. This is still a story that interests me though so there may come a day I come back to it. That day may come soon actually if I lose interest in the story I recently started. However, if I did, I would most likely take the story down and then repost it with a new description and a teen rating rather then a mature one.

4754890 aww, no mature? i mean i'd still read it, since it really interested me, but may i ask why you would remove the clop?

4755694 the clop was always going to be a side note for the story and I could only ever think up one scene that would really benefit from the addition.

4755707 darn. oh well, i'd still read it. like i said, it was a really interesting story.

4754078 now, there would of course be a side story detailing the various possible sexual exploits they might have been having. That way the flop wouldn't interfere with the plot.

4755712 flop. ha! i'd spit out my milk when i read that for some reason. and yeah, that makes sense. i was actually going to ask if that's what you were going to do, but i didn't want to make it sem like the clop was the only reason i was reading it.

4755719 check my other stories. It wouldn't remotely surprise me if you were interested in the intimate details of the relationships

4755725 the only story of your i haven't read is cycle of enslavement, and that's because it's just not my cup of tea. believe me, your an awesome writer, and i know it.

4755728 Thank you and don't worry, I prefer sweet or carnal love stories to enslavement or rape myself. I'm doing that one because my brother ranted about bad enslavement fics and how to do a good one.

4756719 yeah, i'm seriously turned off by stuff like that. but your other stuff is amazing! i eagerly await the continuations of this, and your other stories.

I'm sad this story got cancelled. These two chapters were really good. The story still gets an upvote from me because I like it.

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