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Pretty good so far. The beginning could use some grammar editing, but it got better as it went.
I really hope this doesn't get downvoted to hell just for being an OC story. I can tell it has potential. Keep up the good work.
You can always look for some proof readers
4042319 I apologize. I have had a couple of people read it... but it was for other reasons too.