• Member Since 26th Nov, 2013
  • offline last seen Oct 8th, 2020

Fire_Lotus


Comments ( 3 )

Pretty good so far. The beginning could use some grammar editing, but it got better as it went.
I really hope this doesn't get downvoted to hell just for being an OC story. I can tell it has potential. Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

You can always look for some proof readers

4042319 I apologize. I have had a couple of people read it... but it was for other reasons too.

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