Everyone has heard the stories of Fillydelphia, from the Stable Dweller herself down to the lowliest slaves that survived the unspeakable horrors and hardships. Many forget those who weren't slaves or slavers, but they have stories too...
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Wew. I was worried for Serge there for quite a bit. Poor Kaz, it's non-stop work for him it seems!
Every update is such a treat, thank you for not letting this story die! :P
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I'm just glad to see anyone still reading after all this time and me being so slow about updates. Don't worry, I won't let the story die, but it's increasingly hard to find time and energy these days to write. I plan to hammer the rest of the story out during NaNoWriMo this year, in the very likely event that I'm not done by then. Hopefully 50K more words during November will be enough to finish it!
Hollow Knight: Godmaster/Gods & Glory was released today and then i find out FE: Longtalons updated.
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Also, thank you for not giving up on the story, of the few genuinely good fics there are, too many are already dead (or on permanent "hiatus").
Take as much time as you need imo :P
*unintelligible fanboying*
Good to see that Serge and Lita are fine. But I'm kinda lost in timeline. Is there a ~four years skip between Chapter 18 and 19?
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Ah, yes, there is. It's... less than optimal pacing, I know, but I didn't plan things out as well as I should have. For various reasons I wanted Kaz to be a Talon for more than a couple of years by the time the original story unfolds, and that left me with a lot of dead space between the start and end without much interesting to put in it.
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Compared to a lot of other stories in the FoE fandom would I say that your updates come more often than most. I have seen too many stories have a good pace, only for the author to suddenly leave the story behind with no comment what so ever...
And about NaNoWriMo… Remember quality before quantity. We are here because of your quality, if we wanted quantity would we be over at PH after all =P
So a comment about the story itself, I thought that this was a really really good one. Too many other stories out there throw out big story elements like the robotics factory and don't let them settle, we get at top like a single page where the loss can set in, not a whole chapter like this, so points to you for giving the parts of the story that need time time, and those that can be skipped, like the 4 year skip not so long ago, being skipped.
Nitpicks:
"I couldn't keep track of who all I saw" Either or, not both
"...what?" You forgot a space here