Celestia falls for Soarin.
How many paradoxes and causalities are gonna be in this story?
Looks promising. That's a like from me
Jesus slow down mate!
The romance was like...WHO ARE YOU?
To
I love you, stick your tongue in my muzzle!
Calm down a bit, let the love grow slowly. It's a lot more fun and relaxing to watch it grow from shy and unsure, into confident and full lovey dovey
Fair start, but you may want to work on spelling and sentence structure a bit. Also, when the word princess is used as a title, it's capitalized. Example: "You were a princess when?" "May I present Princess Aurora."
How many paradoxes and causalities are gonna be in this story?
Looks promising. That's a like from me
Jesus slow down mate!
The romance was like...WHO ARE YOU?
To
I love you, stick your tongue in my muzzle!
Calm down a bit, let the love grow slowly. It's a lot more fun and relaxing to watch it grow from shy and unsure, into confident and full lovey dovey
Fair start, but you may want to work on spelling and sentence structure a bit. Also, when the word princess is used as a title, it's capitalized.
Example: "You were a princess when?" "May I present Princess Aurora."