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How many paradoxes and causalities are gonna be in this story?
Looks promising. That's a like from me
Jesus slow down mate!
The romance was like...WHO ARE YOU?
To
I love you, stick your tongue in my muzzle!
Calm down a bit, let the love grow slowly. It's a lot more fun and relaxing to watch it grow from shy and unsure, into confident and full lovey dovey
Ouch, ouch, ouch! Please go back through the whole story. So many spelling errors, especially in the first chapter!
Also, slow down! Put some breaks on this "romance"! So Soarin' has a crush on the Princess. And that's any different than how many other stallions? What makes him so special? Before you say he protected the Princess with his own body, that's his job. I'm ex-US Army, and if the President of the US was in danger, I would put myself between him and that threat, taking a bullet for him if that was necessary. That comes with the job. Sure it deserves recognition, but not in the romantic sense. If anything, that kiss before Soarin' passed out should have just been written off as the blood loss talking.
She would kill me
I've got plains for it. And a proof reader for it.
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Gentlemen (or perhaps and lady... sorry Zamairiac, not sure which you are... no offense) this is a mature fic with a sex tag. Sticking his tongue into her muzzle is perhaps as tame as it will get, and as for speed... well, you know how quick the work can go on a field that has oft been plowed
4314372 yeah, working on clopfic writing, not entirely comfortable with writing it just yet.
Nice
4401427 what's nice?
4401812 chap
4403397 ah, I thought you meant the rewrites actually including clop
4404929 nah. Hm... I've wondered if you'd like me to do a review for this story? Once it's done, I mean. I don't do chapter reviews.
4405083 if you'd like, I'm trying to stretch it out another couple chapters. Two at least, I'll try to make it longer
4405415 sure. If it's already close, I can see sequel potential depending on how things go
4405727 been dealing with some crap right now. Trying to write only when I'm feeling good so I don't take it out on my stories, I'm currently working on chapter two of part two of "royal pain." Have you read it? And do you mind reviewing my Flutterbat stories?
4406762 I'll check em out. Honestly, I've been on leave from reviewing for a year due to college, but now I'm out. All I can say is we'll see
Fair start, but you may want to work on spelling and sentence structure a bit. Also, when the word princess is used as a title, it's capitalized.
Example: "You were a princess when?" "May I present Princess Aurora."