This is a story about Pinkie Pie. This is not a story about Pinkie Pie.
Wait. No, ignore that. It is a story about Pinkie Pie, and today is her Ponyvillesery.
(A 500 follower thank-you story! This is a Choose-Your-Own-Adventure story. At the end of each chapter, in the author notes, you will be given your choices for the actions that will take place in the next chapter. Leave your vote in the comments, and the one that gets the most upvotes after a week will be chosen! Also, I'm hoping to have an audio recording of each chapter. Enjoy, and thank you for your support!)
(Tags will be added as appropriate, but as a note, no matter what choices are made, I am looking to keep this at a Teen rating at the highest)
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Interesting so far. I'm gunna go with... Applejack, keep it nice and simple to ease the story in as it were.
I'm going to go Fluttershy
Maybe she could invite all of them to a picnic
Twinkletail, I love you. :'D
I came here expecting a ponified Stanley Parable. This is not that.
Now, that's not a bad thing at all. This actually has a lot of potential to be a great Choose Your Own Adventure story. The problem is that after listening to your narration, it seems like you're trying to make this a ponified Stanley Parable. However, it completely misses the point of what made The Stanley Parable what it is. The Stanley Parable gives the player the illusion of choice. However, if you don't follow the narrator's directions, you end up screwing yourself (or the narrator, or both you and the narrator) over. And like I said, this is nothing like that. It's just a Choose Your Own Adventure with a witty narration, and that's fine. Stick with that. Focus more on Pinkie rather than the parable, and you've got yourself an interesting little ride.
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Oh, wait. I'm supposed to leave a suggestion here, aren't I?
Um, my vote goes to Blossomforth. Because naming one of the Mane 6 would be too predictable.
Spike.
Or Button. Or both. The three of them can have a mustache party.
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Vinyl Scratch.
Pinkie Pie should visit the Cutie Mark Crusaders. :)
Applejack is good.
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To be fair, even if you do follow his instructions, you get screwed.
Also: I'm going to go with Berry Punch.
I love it so far! I planned on writing a user based adventure story, but I'm having a bit of trouble dreaming it up...
Also, I'd like to drop a vote on Bon Bon.
She should go see Applejack
I am voting for... dang it, why do all my favorite characters have to live outside ponyville and not have plausible explanations for being there? I'm going to vote for Lyra.
I quite like the narration present in this fic. It feels almost like Pinkie Pie is narrating the story herself from a third pony perspective.
As for who she should visit, I'd recommend dropping in on Rainbow Dash. She celebrated Rainbow's birthaversary, so her Ponyvilleseary should be shared with Rainbow Dash.
I think that maybe it goes like ' she wants to visit everypony so she throw a event and invites equestia '
I say Rainbow Dash, the whole day to herself would be a fine day to go pranking.
Pinkie should visit past Pinkie Pie using Doctor Whooves' tardis.
Pinkie Pie should visit her cousin... Applejack.
I'd vote for applejack, some bonding time between the two possible cousins would be nice.
Also... Yer narrator voice is too squeaky. More British, please.
I say she should go see Applejack, because when visiting her she can also visit with Big Mac, Granny Smith and Applebloom, and the rest of the CMC might be there as well. Applejack has the best possibility of seeing multiple friends/Possible Family
I have to go with Rainbow Dash here. Her and Pinkie seem to be good friends, so it's a good first choice.
Pinkie should go visit Applejack, as her probably-cousin would have the most to celebrate.
No, wait, she's probably busy.
Better go check on Dashie, then. Maybe she'd-
No wait, weather duty.
Uh... Twilight! She'd have something fun to-
No, she'd probably just want to read for something not so fun.
Uh... hmm... Fluttershy and Rarity probably aren't good choices for parties, at least not the kind we want to have.
How about the Crusaders?
Dash
"It should be a pony who lives in Ponyville or has a good reason to be there, and must be a canon character..."
Let's say Pinkie Pie!!
She should visit Twi, and Spike should be in the middle of writing a letter to Cheese, who the the Mane 6 have decided should come and help them throw Pinkie a huge party.
Well...honestly, the way the story in The Stanley Parable goes, one might expect a slightly unusual turn in the plotline once Pinkie heads out to visit somepony. Sooo...I'd say, to fit this better with the Parable, why not throw a little Discord into the storyline? After all, something of this magnitude needs someone to control the events. Why not have Pinkie find hints of the adventure's conspirator?
Or have her meet up with Twilight. Because Twilight.
This. I like this.
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Well, thats what happens when you tell me what to do. Dammed guy just loves being in controll, so much to the point he hates games with any kind of freedom. Well see how he likes it when stanly mysteriously gets ahold of a portal gun.
How sad that this is cancelled. You know there is a story by RQK who did something similar called the Pinkie Parable as well.