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SirShadestrider


I'm a writer...with stories. What else would I be?

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Few ponies stop to wonder just how glue is made, or where it comes from. Perhaps it's better that way.

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Comments ( 19 )

I thought somebody already did this?

4008565 Not that I've seen, but if you find one then copy and paste the link in the comments.

4008565 I just checked, and while there is at least one other story on this website about glue, mine is really very different. Thank you for letting me know about the other gluefic though. Before anypony asks, no I did not know there were any other glue related fics on here before you told me.

This story seems rather self contained. But I guess you must have more planned.

4016150 Do you mean for this story, or stories in general?

4039083 When I made that comment the story was labeled as Incomplete.

Huh,I thought this would be a storie were pinkamina told ab that it was made of dead ponies and ended with pinkie walking twords ab with a knife,...shame:pinkiecrazy:.........good story though:twilightsmile:

Another common ingredient in gelatin is bone powder.:twilightsmile:

4123276 Bone powder? that could be from anything! :trixieshiftright:

4133906 By the way, on an unrelated note, I hope you don't mind that I made a comedic parody of your story. :twilightsheepish:

I thought for a minute that glue in Equestria, if it didn't come from ponies...
Came from a certain....
Reproduction organ.....
:applecry: WHY MUST MY MIND BE SO DIRTY

I enjoyed the story, short as it is, or maybe it was because of it.

Just a slight problem, it is spelled Apple Bloom and Pinkie Pie, just check the page?

Quatations are also Capitalized.
The exception is ifit is clearly an interupted sentence with a tag in the middle, but this isn't the case here, for all I could see at least.

On a final note, I love how the Aples speach came out.
Just as I enjoy Pinkie Pie and her silly reactions.

5337872 Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it. Also, fixed the errors. Also where is the "Quotations," because I'm having trouble finding it. Could you please quote the sentence it's in?

5339471 Quotation =

"well, it's not really a game. I just wanted to know where glue comes from." Apple Bloom admitted.

Not that this is a new Paragraph, thus a new sentence, separate from anything the character may have said before.

"but how is it made?!" Apple Bloom whined. Pinkie stopped to think,

Once again, a new paragraph, ignoring if starting with 'but', since it is a Quotation.

"Actually no, I'm here to ask you an important question." Apple Bloom answered.

Acording to guidlines, you don't end a quotation with a full stop, it is ! ? or , that complete the quotation, isn't it?

"Hiya, Apple Bloom," Pinkie waved, "trying to get a cutie mark in confectionery sampling?" Pinkie asked.

Would also be a correct Quotation, from what I understand of the description.

From what I could see, the Names are correct now. I am sure your future readers will appreciate the improvements.

5339989 Oh! I think I get it now!:pinkiegasp: Thanks!:pinkiehappy:

5341498 That is always good.

Maybe I am not so randomly out there and all that hard to follow?

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