There I was, staring at Derpy's beautiful face as she walked up to the alleyway that started it all. I was glad she could finally go home to her friends and family. But, as she started to get sucked into the hole above her, I grabbed her arm, and yelled over the loud noise of the wind coming from the hole "DON'T FORGET ME, PLEASE!!! YOU WERE MY BEST OF FRIENDS, AND I ONLY WISH WE COULD'VE POSSIBLY BEEN MORE!!!" She smiled, and tears got sucked up the hole as she replied, "Who wants a muffin?"
Poker face...
With that, she let go.
"NO, DERPY!!!" I yelled as I shot up from my sleep with my arm held out. I looked around and saw we weren't in the alleyway, but actually in the house. "Wha...?" I said as I rubbed my eyes. Derpy repeated, "Who wants a muffin?" I looked over to the hallway leading to the kitchen and saw Derpy holding a tray with hot fresh muffins. She cocked her head sideways and squeed as she looked at me. I wondered why there was something different about her. I removed the sheets covering me and got off the couch, heading up to Derpy and raising my hand half-way. I then said, "I'd love one...After brushing my teeth, of course. And taking a shower." At that last part about the shower, she blushed, and I made a confused face. I gave her a hug and walked up the stairs to the bathroom. I stripped down and took my toothbrush and toothpaste in the shower with me.
I wet my toothbrush, and as I poured on the toothpaste, I thought about my dream. I thought about the fact that it involved Derpy, like most of my dreams are now, lately. I shook the thoughts out of my head, however, as I then rinsed my mouth and finished my shower. I took my yellow towel and wrapped it around my waist and walked into the bedroom. I took out some boxer briefs, a white-beater and some socks. I put those on and then I picked out a suit. That day was picture day. Derpy, I realized, didn't have anything special to wear. So I had an idea! I asked mom to come with me to the bank so that I could take out some money. She agreed, so after eating some muffins, we hurried over to the bank and took out some money, then went to a nearby clothing store. We looked for a dress until she picked out a white dress with gold trimming that went down to her knees. We looked at the price and saw it was 20% off. So, she tried it on, and asked me to help zip up the back. I did, and she looked down, then looked at me with a red face. I looked at her with a smile, because I thought maybe she was just excited about the dress being a perfect fit.
We bought the dress, and she wore it to school. We laughed and played around on the way. When we got to school, Mrs. Karmic (the special ed dean) came up to me involving the previous day's events. I took out my phone and played the recording of David making fun. She nodded and chased after David, who was walking towards home room. Derpy and I looked at each other and laughed so hard we busted a gut. Then, we walked into home room and were swarmed by the class. a few of them even said we made a cute couple. I shyly looked away and scratched the back of my head. Derpy tilted her head downwards and put a hand over her mouth. They laughed, and at first period, we went downstairs for picture taking. I was chosen first, since my last name started with D. I sat down, and right before the lady took the pic, someone from the class pushed Derpy into me. So the picture came out with it looking like Derpy was giving me a hug and me returning the favor.
I was now on the floor, Derpy on top of me, staring at me with a huge grin on her face. I cracked a smile, and we laughed so hard we held our sides. She then got off of me and I stood up, holding out my hand so she could get up. Second period, we went to AIS, where I helped her out with turning on the computer and everything (remember; Equestria+ponies=no computer age). Then, math related AIS, math for two periods and science. Normally, these classes would've been boring, but Derpy made the teachers laugh in her own special way. So I guess you could say, Derpy's second day in earth's school system was Derpy-fied.
"You ever hear of love at first sight?" I asked my friend Savone on the phone. He and I go way back (like, seventh grade). He's the one who triple dog dared me to watch at least one episode of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Except when I went on Netflix, it became more than just one episode. But anyway, I heard wind whistle past the phone indicating he nodded. "But why would you bring this up if we're talking about season four?" he asked. I responded by telling him, "You're never going to believe who I found..." By now, Savone was confused, and asked, "Who?" I yelled into the phone "DERPY HOOVES!!!" Savone didn't believe me, and asked me to put her on the phone to prove it. So I did, and after they chatted (for about an hour), Savone said, "I believe you."
I told him "I think I'm falling for her. But I don't think she likes me back." "I'm sure she does. Just wait for her to tell you when the time is right. Then you'll know for sure," he replied. I said thank you, then said that I had to go to bed. We both hung up, and I went to bed, thinking "I hope Savone is right..."
meanwhile...
"Can't he see I'm making it obvious for him?" asked Derpy as she started to tear up. "I don't think he really likes me...I hope with all my heart he thinks of me as more than a friend..."
4020953 Shes Derpy
Don't question it
4022005 Your keyboard broken?
4023738 Good point.
Okay, just a couple of formatting mistakes
1. Everytime someone else is speaking you press enter.
Instead of "Hi" I said. "Hello," He said back, it would be
"Hi!" I said with a smile, and waving.
"Hello!" he replied, returning a smile.
2. When the protagonist is thinking, in my story, I always put it like this:
'I hope she likes me...' I thought.
To avoid confusion between out loud and to self. Always put thoughts in italics, and instead of " put '.
Okie I'm done :3
4023782 I do like how the story is going though. Good job keep it up!
4023785 Thanks. And Opinion noted.
The Feels! Need new chapters!
4024983 I will. By the end of today, I should hopefully have a new chapter out. I work fast when my mind is set on something, so be on the lookout!
4025479 K
This is amazing music within us you should make more chapters
4027385 Thank you. Working on it now.
Hey im writing a story myself and I was wonder if you wanted to edit it
You dont have to if you dont want to im juat asking
4028479 im just asking
4030210 I've never been asked to edit a story before! It would be an honor! I would try to do my best to make your story really worth reading! Thank you! Thankyouthankyouthankyou!
4030831 youre welcome bro also this is the first story ive wrote
4030913 also do younhave a gmail?
4030913 Ah, first stories; I remember mine. It sucked at first, but then it got 7 likes, cutting ahead of 6 dislikes.
4030919 Yes, I do have a G-mail. I use it most of the time for my YouTube channel, which is why the channel is named after me.
What is it so I can send you part of my rough draft
4030994 I was thirteen at the time, so please excuse the stupid username; thabigid1@gmail.com
It meant Tha Big ID. Now that I look back on it, I feel kinda funny.
4031002 btw I aubaceibed to yoy on youtube
4031013 I subscribed to you
4031017 Thanks for the subscribe! What video did you see that made you subscribe? Was it the songs I made with GarageBand, the readings, or the vid where I sang Story of My Life?
4031032 the readings of coarse ill check the music later
4031048 Thanks.
4031048 And now, I've subscribed to you.
4031067 did you get the story I sent you
4031092 I'll go check now.
4023741 nah just excited!
4031251
Dang, so many comments!
4031266 tell me bout it.
Josh:Yeah 50.
Me:Josh back in my head.
Josh:Fiiiiiine.
4031280 JOSH...PUT ME...A GLASS...OF MALK!!!!
4031286 Josh gives you chocolate milk.
4031293 YUSS!!!! *drinks* Pour me another!
4031297 Josh pulls out grain silo of chocolate milk.
4031307 *dies from too much chocolate milk*
4031312 (uses Arnold Shwartzineggar accent) You have been terminated. (Puts sunglasses on)
4031312 (uses Arnold Shwartzineggar accent) You have been terminated. (Puts sunglasses on)
4031319 YOU REPLIED TWICE!!!
4031320
4031325 Don't laugh.-Mutters something.
:Now you just listen don't you go making fun of my fiancé.
4031340 *makes fun of to be troll*
4031340 Don't worry, Mousei11 is not making fun. Just surprised you said it twice.
4031345 Don't know why it did I hit the button once.
4031349 Lol I think we are putting too many comments xD
4031346 I wasn't?
I MEAN UH
I wasn't!
4031354 Anyways, yeah, I've had enough problems with too many comments already.
4031354 As I'm sure you know from my recent blog post.
4031364 xD