So. When are you going to decide to write the next one? Will it have the same amount of space between updates as the last one did?

Very well done, glad to see you took it. Though, sorry I could do more without my laptop

It immediately went on hiatus... Well. Fuck me.

I'm loving this story, and this chapter was awesome, making it all the worse when I saw the 'Hiatus' tag on it now.
Don't get me wrong, I understand why you might have done it, mainly cause I'm kinda on the same road on my own story, and as a whole it's your choice, it is a hobby in the end after all, and only you should decide how to do it.
I'm just sad for me. Hoping for another chapter soon

Also, keep in mind, the worse thing you can do, is drag the story out when we, as the audience, know both main charcters in a love story like each other, then you risk the story dragging. A good example can be found up to Rairtys and Fluttershys first kiss in Green. See, what makes a good 'getting together' love story, the tension for us as an audience in only knowing that one party likes the other, but we don't know if they like them back, therefore, there's a chance said person may not like them back. This make sence?

I wish I could upvote this story again.

a great chapter, i always wait for the next. but why couldnt scoots do both, punch pip and kiss sweetiebelle? what i would've done...or possibly chuck the bottle at his face.

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The first story "Falling Strong" is just the prologue of this part. I did it like this so to add some solidarity to the story. Don't ask why the links are still everywhere (I'm looking at you, Also Liked sidebar), because the story was deleted a long time ago. So, no need to read any prequels; this is the only part there is at the moment.

5728390 Thanks I just don't read them most of the time

please please please make the next chapter

I remember reading this story almost a year ago. I almost didn't read it because when a story usually has more then 4 tags, it deters me. But, something compelled me, and I loved the story. But, sadly, it seems to have been delayed for awhile.... Please continue this story. I sincerely hope if you do, you lead it down a right path.

Are you going ot update?

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I plan on it. I'm kind of stuck right now at the beginning of Chapter 7, but I'm going to try to get back on the pony when autumn comes around.

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try to get back on the pony

I see what you did there...

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Please forgive me for askin but have you made some progress since your last comment? This story is Really good, and I want to know if you'll actually continue this one. Or that you're alive after all

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Sadly, no. I've been distracted by the ideas and the alluring universe of another story, and haven't made much progress on this one.

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Well I guess I'll never understand such people like you:
Starting 5 stories, and not a single one's going to be ever finished. (No offense, and I'm sorry for writing this, just judging by how many of your stories are incomplete or on hiatus)
At least your the kind you're actually answers to my question :)
Sorry for being such a jerk... It's just that this one's got my interest, you've really done a good job on this one. and I suppose it's my bad that I'm too curious about the rest of the story or that I'm impatient.

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And as I much as I hate myself for asking you for this, I have to:
Would you please answer and react some way before I start thinking that you Just ignored me? (Just many writer done that)

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I'm sorry. I just didn't have a response to that, hence why I didn't reply.

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I don't want to sound offensive, but why can't you finish one story at a time before starting a New one? You think about the 'new' and will be unable to finish it again, and you Just keep adding half-written stories. (Just look on your account) Eventually it will lead up to the point,that no one will care about what you post unless you finish the stories people want to see finished....
I may have overreacted it, but time passes quickly and I've seen it many Times on this site and it's Really sad that people come up with a nice story, and the only irritating thing is when they tell you that there are no intention finishing the story because thinking about a New one..
Just try to understand my perspective too.
I know that when an idea comes, people wants to do it immidiately before they forget, so I understand the situation.

Sorry for disturbing you with my thoughts and opinion but I don't want THIS story to be wasted. I've seen enough nice story gone wasted
Good luck for your writings anyway!

This gave me memories of light drinking when I was 15. I had a couple of friends over they brought their own normal sodas and I was looking for mine when I saw a bottle of vodka in the fridge. And it wasn't some cheap shit it was I believe 100 something proof(sorry I don't know the percent) and we each got the smallest glass we could find and poured it about a third the way up with vodka. The rest with soda(big mistake the smell stuck around for days) we all go slightly drunk and had a good night.

“No, you perv. We’re going to watch movies.” Scootaloo opened up the cabinet’s doors, revealing a vast collection of movies, mostly on disc with the occasional tape in the midst of them. There were hundreds of them, creating an abstract portrait of colorful cover art. She turned back to see the guys’ surprised expressions. “Sweetie’s mother collects movies,” she explained shortly. She turned back to the movies, bending over slightly. “How about a Daring Do movie marathon, minus the fourth part—unless you guys want to watch Daring Do get raped.”

Reads this
Goes to YouTube
Types in “South Park Indiana Jones”
Watches

Yep
I understand this reference

Will this ever be finished? Its 3 and a bit years on now and it seems unlikely. But ive seen stories recover in that time. Please consider its an amazing concept that so far has been excellently executed

Come on, please finish this!!!