From the Mist to the Forest

The Universe is a strange thing. It binds us all together, dictates the laws by which we live and is the very reason for our existence. However, the universe works in mysterious ways and things aren't always as they seem. James and Samantha will find that death isn't the end, just a gateway to a new beginning.

edited by Bpkyle777

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Leo Archon

Leo Archon #1 · Mar 1st, 2014 · · ·

So... James and Samantha become Luna and Celestia respectively? Interesting... Following because of curiosity.

Shirohige

Shirohige #2 · Mar 2nd, 2014 · · ·

Interesting. You should continue it.

PinkiePieFox

PinkiePieFox #3 · Mar 2nd, 2014 · · ·

This does seam intersting... Wonder what is going to happen next... Or what will happen... Its an intersting story....

Bpkyle777

Bpkyle777 #4 · Mar 2nd, 2014 · · ·

I love how every comment so far has used the word "interesting". I only noticed that, because I was going to say the same thing! Let me try something else... Ahem...

This story certainly seems fascinating so far. I'd love to see what twists and turns this "Royal Sisters" setup will take. I eagerly await your next chapter!

websterhamster

websterhamster #5 · Mar 2nd, 2014 · · ·

4020495 To avoid the use of the word interesting, I'll describe my thoughts in another language.

This story has a kusah premise, and has my attention. I'd suggest the author find a proofreader or pre-reader, however, as there were a number of places that could use a workover, including grammatical errors and poor sentences and paragraphs.

I'll be following this to see what happens next!

Bpkyle777

Bpkyle777 #6 · Mar 2nd, 2014 · · ·

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*whispers* You should have seen it before I edited it.

Er, no offense Raven. *nervous chuckle*

ForestPony

ForestPony #7 · Mar 2nd, 2014 · · ·

I am interested in seeing where this is going

RavenGuardian17

RavenGuardian17 #8 · Mar 2nd, 2014 · · ·

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Eh, I don't mind. It was the first time I'd ever written 3k words in two days (usually I'm around 1k words a week) so it's not surprising that it had some errors. Would you mind editing, Webster?

websterhamster