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Well... it was interesting I love how you use Rarity's element against her.
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Thanks. I kind of felt sorry for her, but kind of not. She could have said "no."
So, I assume that after this there will be very little in the way of sexual content, right?
Because that very thing is what's making it so hard to push this fic on Spacebattles.
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Relatively speaking, there isn't much sexual content left. But this is not the last of it. Of course, I can't spoil anything, but I'll say that the passage to which you refer is the most... unpleasant one I have. I was very specifically trying to be creepy and uncomfortable with it, where in other places, my focus will be the actual relationship between the characters.
I can only think of two other things that might be as off-putting as Rarity's scene, and they both happen late-story. One isn't written sexually, but it's still very taboo, and the other is a sex dream in the mind of a very twisted character (not yet fully introduced [no, it isn't Discord]).
But no, this will never be about the sex. I'm not in it to get people, or myself, off.
Awesome chapter!! The sexypony scene with Rarity was well done and I did feel sorry for her. True, she could have said, "no", but Lacey has manipulated her into thinking she was taking the best option. Keep the chapters coming Little Guy... Can't wait to see what you do with Octavia.
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Thanks! It's all a matter of how strong-willed you think she can be. I think she could have been stronger, but, well, that's me. She was under a lot of stress when the decision was made. Next chapter coming soon-ish; I'm thinking in a couple days, at most.
Poor Octavia. That's all I have to say about her. Poor, poor Octavia.