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Incapable of being serious.

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This story is a sequel to The Strange Origin Of Fillyfoolers


Twilight Sparkle, the introvert, is afraid.

She's afraid that ponies are watching her.
She's afraid that ponies are judging her.

She just wants to be herself.

So she decides to hold back any emotion, thinking that it will solve her problems.


Only to discover that she was wrong; and now it's too late for her to say 'sorry'.

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Comments ( 14 )

it doesn't make sense.
also, is celestia dead? and why?
Edit: just read your AN. Why should anyone go looking for the elements, if Luna didn't come back? My first statement increased in value.

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This is the story of Twilight Sparkle telling her life story, the first part is Twilight Sparkle writing about her life in 2010, October 10th, the date Friendship Is Magic Part 1\Part 2 aired.

The second part is Twilight Sparkle writing to Princess Celestia, she did not send the letter to her, she mentally did. She wrote it out, hoping that Celestia, who had died, would hear it from heaven.


Make more sense?

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I just deleted that part and realized how stupid it sounded :twilightblush:

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No.

But probably not your fault. I just can't imagine that anyone could decide to "not feel anything". The inability to feel emotion is a very serious and ultimately rare mental illness. And if Twiliight would have it, she wouldn't decide. She just wouldn't feel anything from the moment she was born. She wouldn't even be able to grasp the concept of emotions.

Maybe it's me, and I just don't like illogical or unbeliveable stories. I complain if it isn't conclusive in itself.

"To think this all wouldn't of happened

"Wouldn't have happened." The phrase is "wouldn't have", not "wouldn't of."

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Well, in Frozen, sorry if you haven't seen the movie and don't get it, but Elsa says

"Conceal It, Don't Feel it,"

And, I've kind of trained myself to not to be excited in situations due to people making fun of me for being over enthusiastic and fear of people looking at me weird. I really wrote this story just for that reason.

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Oops, thank you for correcting me on that!

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This is the story of Twilight Sparkle telling her life story, the first part is Twilight Sparkle writing about her life in 2010, October 10th, the date Friendship Is Magic Part 1\Part 2 aired.
The second part is Twilight Sparkle writing to Princess Celestia, she did not send the letter to her, she mentally did. She wrote it out, hoping that Celestia, who had died, would hear it from heaven.
Make more sense?

Guys.
I know this story doesn't make sense to most people.

But I still love it, and I am not taking it down no matter how many damn dislikes it gets.

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But I still love it, and I am not taking it down no matter how many damn dislikes it gets.

Yes, that's the attitude I want to see in every new writer who'd joined this site. If you keep this attitude through all the constructive criticism and learn from them. Then you'll become one of the greats, so here's a upvote from me:ajsmug:

3960336 no,it's a option.

This story is a sequel to The Strange Origin Of Fillyfoolers

Story does not exist

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