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Puddle Jumper


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The numbers of Octavia/Vinyl clopfics and fanfics

Around this time is too damn high

PLZ CONTINUE

Haha Octavia is so scatterbrained, she's probably all like "stupid sexy Vinyl!" xD

Shiiiii..... Octavia you cray cray.... Let's see what happens next!

Wow that was intense, not seen a sex scene like that in a while!

Not bad. Not bad at all.:twilightsmile::heart:

O...M...F...G, you paint the most amazing mental picture with this chapter. Especially the wildly passionate, amazingly detailed sex scene. You have some rediculous talent.

*finishes reading*

That was... beautiful. Heartfelt, moving, and passionate, all while being so intensely loving and caring and powerful... if there is an award for perfect story, this has won it for the Romance category.

You have won, dear author, you have won everything. *kneels and hands entirety of universe to author, pledging my servitude as well*

man am i glad you posted all 5 chapters in one sitting. That has to be the best cliffhanger i've read in awhile.

:raritystarry: I have only said this to only two other authors, but with I will say it again. When I read this story I pictured I was on the sidelines watch in it unfold into what it was as I continued to read I was able to see clearly the image you were creating and with that I can that you have a way of painting a picture not with color but with words you are an artists with words. :yay::heart:
I hope you continue to write more stories. :moustache:

Absolutely FUCKING AMAZING!!!
It's has been far to long since I've read a story thats so spectacularly beautiful and passionate!
You Sir Puddle Jumper, you are spectacularly beautiful!!
I believe someones already given you the universe so I can't offer much, so please accept a like, fave and follow!!!

why you run away Octavia?:applecry:

hmm that was unexpected

YES THAT IS A GOOD FICTION

THIS ... WAS ... EPIC

Listened to everfree network when i was reading this:3

I. Can't. Stop. READING.

Dude this was fantastic. I'm no critic but I would give this a 10/10! You're really good at writing Romance, keep it up!:twilightsmile:

It's over?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Puddle Jumper, you're an amazing author. Well done!

Was almost crying at the middle. :applecry:So many FEELS!!!!! You are a great artist!! :moustache:I could picture EVERYTHING!!! :raritystarry::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::heart:

:pinkiehappy:Cray Cray Pinkie seal of approvle:pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp:

this has got to be the best story I have ever read...EVER :moustache:

pistoning penis. Classic line right there :moustache:

I've never read a story where Vinyl and Octavia weren't in a relationship already. This was the first. I loved it.

Does anyone know of any other fics like that on this site?

Get these feels away from me!:fluttercry::applecry::raritydespair::pinkiesad2:

I love this fanfic more than words can describe. I hope someday I can write something with this much passion.

Comment posted by BFANproject deleted Aug 15th, 2016

THIS. THIS IS WHAT ROMANCE IS ALL ABOUT!!!!!!!!

Keeping it caring and loving (having your other half stand by you through all the bad and worse times), and at the same time, keeping it erotic and passionate as fuck (the raunchy interaction between two lovers that can make one's libido sky-rocket all high into the air leaving them both sweating and exhausted)

You're story portrayed this accurately and tugged at my emotions as well. Well done!

I can't stop reading either. Though I half expected Vinyl to show up with a date.

This....was.......AMAZING!!!

i cried reading this chapter, you did such a good job at pulling me into this story that by the time things got emotional near the end, i actually started tearing up. bravo!

(also this is criminally underrated for such a good story lol)

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