After a falling out between Vinyl and Octavia, Bon Bon notices the DJ is out of sorts. Just how bad is Vinyl taking the break up? And what will it take to bring her back?
Special thanks to Avox for proofreading!
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I dunno what to say. I like Ponies, games, pretty much everything. I like grimdark a lot. In fact, I used to RP a lot of different stuff, but it didnt end well. (Don't ask) I have lots of great ideas,
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3945520 I really, really need to put that on my page somewhere!
Good start so far! It's well written, has four of my favourite non-mane 6 characters in it, and an interesting premise. One thing I noticed though:
Octavia is grey, no?
3947834 ._.
I live being colorblind.
Will fix!
Hnn. I still dont know if I'm going to like where this is going, ( Im a die hard OctaStratch, and LyraBon.) But anyway it is very well written and I am looking forward to more. (I just hope my feelers can take it, lol)
4149223 Glad you're enjoying it!
I will ship Bon Bon with everyone.
4149298 Shipping Bon Bon with everyone works. (especially if its at the same time)
You should make it a 4 way (or write another story with a 4 way, theres just not enough LyraBonTaviScratch fics out there.)
4149319 I'll think about it. This story is a bit more slow and emotional, so a 4 way romance won't quite fit in.
4149499 Right on. Just try to be gentle with my feels lol.
4149499 Actually I think im gonna try writing a 4 way now. One where Lyra likes Bon Bon, Bon Bon likes Vinyl, and Vinyl like Octavia. Confusion and love squares ahead.
4149539
But that's only 3...who is there for Octavia to love!?
But if you do write it, I'll definitely take a look!
4149570 Her cello, of course!
That's the only thing she kneeds.
*stops making dirty/cross-story jokes and actually reads the story
4371527 Heh, I guess if she's passionate enough about her cello, it might work out.