Spike buys a comic book and finds it fun even though there's blood and gore. Twilight sees him reading it and doesn't approve of him reading it. The book is called 'The Darkness'. how will is not go wrong. Right?
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Spike is such a stud.
4967252 No worries, I know how that can be.
The love scene through off, but as long as you keep the classical Darkness ripping, tearing, and out right destroying, I'm good.
another question I have: how big are Spike and Rainbow in the dream? Is she now 4x his size or something? or the classic "f*** logic" of dreams and have him able to control everything, including how big he is
So that just happen...well then looking foreword to the murder and if you coninue Spike and Vinyal as a ship I would be ok with it.
I love this story.
Dream hu
needs some touch up but it's coming along
hmm you sir are in need of editting help.
i VERY RARELY fell I know more about writing than others but looking at this it just all seems to rushed and not very through give more details, flesh it out, and CHECK THY GRAMMAR! If you want I am willing to pre-read future chapters if you want but I will fave this because I wish to see how the future chapters will turn out..
Mr. Zelda C. Brony, AWAY!!
this is clearly based off of that game one The Darkness just make sure you don't forget to write all the dumbass's dying in incrisingly more violent ways other than that like dont forget what your tentacles did when you had to equiped yyou could force one up the bad guys ass where hes pulled inside out not sure how youd write that though
5284397 I agree with you on 'why everyone writes a dark story with a creepy death on blueblood.' But there are some who see a reason why he act the way he is. The many but the best know is that his real parents died somehow and Celestia took him in. It is also said the he hates being treated as a royal with he doesn't have wings like his sister Cadance, so trying to be an ass hoping to be kicked out would give him freedom but it hasn't worked well. So what I thought of doing is making Blueblood a good guy in this with a sad backstory and a shocking event that well blow all the readers' mind.
This feels like I'm watching a poorly done fan-dub of a Japanese Anime, or listening to a poorly translated fan dub of a really beast Japanese Metal Song.
To wrap that up: You need an editor twice as bad as America needs to get rid of their debt!
More please.
3939363 when will the darklings going to appear
Lanceblazer
IT WAS GETTING GOOD Bring it back!
horns are a bit bulky for Dash; she's a speedster, better to be streamlined than bulky.