Dude, I don't want to hate this...but I have to.

I can't remember who was who, still I wait for it to be complete!

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Welp, I've read worse. Keep it comin'

"More Dildos!" XD
I love funny clopfics

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Why?

3936160 You broke the 3 golden rules of mine:

1) Grimdark (rape is part of it)

2) Incest (as the tags say)

3) BronyStories

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There are two things: first, I wanted as much emphasis as possible that the Power Ponies are NOT the Mane Six. They just look somewhat like them. Second, the personalities of the characters willgive a broad idea of which Power Pony is the expy of which Mane Six member.

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Are you Shooter's friend? I just realized the name is familiar. If you are, hi there!

I hope you like this. I told him about it and he seemed excited.

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There is something of a mix of comedy and seriousness going on here. Granted, later chapters tend toward the serious but there should still be light touches.

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The incest is technical: two brothers have sex with the same mare. And it's not strict grimdark rape.

3936257 At what point does that thing make it better?

And rape is still rape. Trying to beat around the bush about it is not a good thing to do.

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Well then I see any reason on why you're commenting on this story. If you don't like the story, go quietly. Anything else is just asking for attention.

3936282 I no longer want to say anything.

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Check Wiktionary. Under noun it is shown used in that fashion. It's an intangible or transcendent thing that seems to act like an adjective. I've actually seen it used that way many times.

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You have seen it used a lot of times, I haven't.
That's where our opinions split.
I won't argue about this though. I just wanted to know if it was intentional or not.

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I'm choosing to take that as a compliment.

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You're a good man, Bronystories Brown. You've certainly been good to me and I always appreciate it.

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So was "Daring Done." I thought I saw you comment on that.

THIS is my fetish.

*Looks at all the fetish tags.*

Oh...my...

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Which one? I must know.

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Too much, or not enough?

3937444 ALL. OF. IT.
The fact that it's all with super heroes is what cinches it though. I eagerly await more!

3937444 Over ten fetishes in a story kinda scares me off. You still get my up vote.

I haven't read it yet, and I know I'm going to be reading this under the covers.

Under the sticky, soaking wet covers...

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3938594 Oh god that vid was so funny xD

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Over ten fetishes for the first CHAPTER. Who knows what else he may throw in by the time he writes another 5. And then spike himself or Maniac.

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I sometimes feel a bit guilty about having the fetish I like like that imperiled superheroine thing. To be fair I also like a dominated supervillainess. I'm an equal-opportunity pervert.

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Well, there are seven separate scenes. So each one has one or two fetishes. Not a lot on an individual level.

3939675 Honestly I'm surprised there's not more of it. What could possibly be hotter?

This is amazing. Nothing else, it's just purely amazing.

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My computer, the one I use for story uploads and updates, chokes on the site. It takes over two minutes to load a single page. I wanted to get the whole thing done as much as possible. So that's all the fetishes in the story.

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Thank you. I'm glad for eager readers.

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I'll chime in, I agree. Hot stuff. It's sexy and in need of more action. I hope you like the coming chapters, I tried to be as varied and interesting as possible. Each one has a bondage and sex scene tailored to their powers and personalities.

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Just wait for more chapters. It should get better.

Uhh....This is really good. 5 out of 5 Pinkies

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And in my opinion, this isn't even one of the good sex chapters.

Dang, you got everything but futa...

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This will sound odd in this context (given the story) but I agree with you. It's odd. As for me, this is a manifestation of my super-peril fetish. Herones and villainesses. And in a meta-contextual sense, the world is exactly as it should be; Spike'sjust reading a very abberant, very odd doujin. I've actually railed against certain sorts of rape fics; "The Proscenium Arch" is almost a polemic, as well as a manifestation of my own personal discomfort with certain classes of story. I also write my own preferred classes, as seen in "Gilda: Griffin the Gut-Buster" and "Daring Done" where the ones on the recieving end retain petulance and will to the end.

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Wish I could make corrections on my phone. I hate these little things that are just embarrassingly trivial yet stick out.

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I'm okay with that

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Check my blog. My latest one is me angrily attacking the premises of "Fall of Equestria" and the regularly shown extreme and unambiguous misogyny. And check my story "Etiamsi Omnes, Ego Non" which is a pseudo-Fall-of-Equestria story (it has a lot of the themes and ideas but I didn't study it in enough depth to really call it a proper in-universe story) but which is about a rebellion against the misogynistic new order.

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Which comment was that in reply to?

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Mine
I didn't really read the ones after that

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You, my friend, are my new favorite person. You are outraged by assaults on the literary arts, you're as pissed about the Gary Stu-ness of Fall and know why the story makes absolutely no sense. You're a good fellow and I hope you stick around.

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In the words of Winston from Ghostbuster (with Censorshy) "I have seen sh that would turn you white." I mentioned seeing an image of a pony being put alive into a meat grinder, andthat's not the only part of the image. I once got panic attacks over a part of a story involving a drowned pregnant mare because of the way it was written. I endure because I love ponies more than I hate the awful things done to ponies by the bored and the edgy. Watch season four. Reconnect with what ponies actually are. The only antidote to all this ugliness is real pony episodes.

3940690 Oh, i'm not in it for the sex. No no my friend! I am in it to see Twitty (AKA The Matterhorn) Get captured.