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Fleur de Lis — Her elegance, her beauty, her grace. She was everything I ever wanted.
Unfortunately, there is a problem:
She doesn't exist.
How is it possible to fall in love with something unreal, someone whose body I will never feel? Well, never is such a controversial word, isn't it?
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I'm confused as to how all of this is going to go down, though that Tragedy tag isn't doing much for my hope of a happy ending
Next one ASAP bud, you don't see many Human x Fleur on here
3906280 First of all; oh my god, you just commented something I wrote LOL
Well, about the tragedy tag, I think is more about a bittersweet ending, than a really 'tragic tragic' one...
I would like to read more.
Pretty good keep at it
how you describe the events, feelings and people, its mesmerizing. note: when Zamairiac says that a story is quite good, then you deserve a mustache.
3968501 Thanks dude! I was working on next chapter right now.
ps. Will it be a HiE story?
3968514 Nope
3968516 meh. But still this story is awesome! I also like to read a sad fic once in a while
3968525 I can assure you, he doesn't go to Equestria, but he will find a very peculiar way to 'bring' her. Just wait and see...
3968535 OH NO A CLIFFHANGER!
WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME?!
Ready for more good sir.
3906280
It's a damn shame I'll never finish my Fleur x human story.
3977027 For sure it is, your story was great...
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You read it? You have my deepest sympathies.
3977224 Yep, every single chapter of it. I read almost every story related to Fleur, but yours was really exceptional. I still think you should work on it
You're a great writer in my opinion.
3977224 Why can't you finish it?
Oh dear. Is he going to make a Fleur copy in real life? Not good...
3978729 Wanna know an interesting fact? This story is just a prologue to something real big coming in the future...
3978946 YESH! MOAR STORIES!
Can't wait for more.
Ugh this dude is REALLY desperate for some mare pussy. Anyhoo, keep ze good work!
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I have strong bad feeling that she is not going to make it, or she is not going to love him in return.
I dont know why I feel that just call it a hunch I guess.
Can I please have some more please sir.
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If that's the case, you shouldn't have a tragedy tag, just the sad one. To quote the FAQ
A lot of people (like me) are turned away from tragedy stories and there's no point in limiting your readership just because of an incorrect tag. I was really interested in the concept when I read the small summary in your user profile, then became really hesitant when I saw the tragedy tag. I'm glad I read and saw your comment.
4943027 I understand your point, but I wouldn't say the tag is incorrect - that because in fact, the story will end as a tragedy in certain aspects, also:
That's a complicated point, who's the real hero here?
Anyway, I'm currently revising this story (misspellings, etc...) And as soon as I finish, I'll publish the last chapter. I'll not give spoilers but I hope you enjoy, to the extent possible, the end .
Well...shit.
7739004 I realize that most of people will hate the ending, or the story as a whole. I started writing it nearly three years ago, and only revised and finished it now.
7739028 *Slightly nod some* gotta admit...never thought he went down like that. but I guess that what happen when the unhappiness, loneliness, and pain just...eats you away until nothing is left.
I'm sorry but I don't really understand what happened to Fleur?
7743268 As far as I believe, he locked himself in the castle so she wouldn't die in the fire. The rest remains a mystery, because when I started this story back in 2014, it was meant to be a prequel for a long Fleur-focused story. In which it would tell what was in the box, and what ultimately happened to her.
It's still a possibility.
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Oh I see, anyway, it's a real good story though.
7745102 Thank you. There was a wave of dislikes after the last chapter, but that is understandable, given the fact I wrote this as a puzzle missing pieces.