Starswirl's Journal

by AlesFlamas

Honeydew's Special Section for Practicing Writng #2

Mr. Starswirl still doesn't know that I read his journal. I'm starting to feel really guilty. I want to tell him, but I don't want to distract him from his work. He's working really hard to find a way to get rid of that meanie Sombrero Lord guy. It would be really nice if that poopy-head was just gone. I'm gonna wait to tell him.

Clover and Platinum are really fun, for babies and all. It's like I'm a big sister or something. I like being a big sister. I hope I don't have to leave Mr. Starswirl's. It's so nice here. Everyponies so nice to me.

. . .I really hope I don't have to go.

Comments

[SebasMarolo]

the poor thing...

[The King in Yellow]

What could possibly go wrong? Everything can and probably will go wrong.

[Sauron]

Honeydew's use of "poopy-head" strikes me as way too juvenile for her. She's just learning how to write, but the way she writes seems mature enough that "poopy-head" wouldn't be a serious insult. I don't think I've heard anyone beyond the age of 4 use it seriously.