Chapter three: A New Found Love
Chapter three: A New Found Love
By: Fluttershy2424 and AppleJack40
With inspiration from PressStart
Fluttershy Woke up to Princess Celestia's beautiful sun shining through the curtains of her bedroom windows. So she proceeded to sit up on her bed. She yawned then stretched, while rubbing the sleep from her eyes with one hoof and taking the blanket off of herself with the other hoof. When she finally opened her eyes all the way she noticed Angel Bunny at the foot of her bed, he was standing there tapping his foot impatiently while pointing at a book he was holding. Fluttershy then noticed that it was the cookbook
he was holding.
"Oh good morning Angel, what are you doing up this early?" asked Fluttershy
"num num." Said Angel while throwing the cookbook at Fluttershy, which landed right in front of her.
While looking at the cookbook, she recognized the recipe. "Oh you want the salad I showed you yesterday?" replied Fluttershy
he responded by shaking his head up and down very quickly causing his ear's to hit his face.
"Well a promise is a promise, just give Mama some time to get ready, OK." replied Fluttershy
She briskly trotted to the bathroom to start her day, After Fluttershy's normal routine of washing up, and feeding the animals, she headed back upstairs to fetch the cookbook to see what she needs to make Angel's salad, once she got it she headed downstairs and into the kitchen.
When she got to the kitchen, she walked over to the counter and set the cookbook on it, than opened it to the page with the salad Angel wanted, she then read the ingredients.
"Huh, let see what we need, Ummm lettuce, carrots, radishes, tomatoes, cheese, whip-cream, and a cherry."said Fluttershy.
After she read the ingredients she made her way to the refrigerator, and to her amazement she barely had half of the ingredients she needed to make the salad.
"What, how is this possible, when I just went grocery shopping the other day?" Fluttershy thought to herself.
Angel Bunny came up to Fluttershy and tapped on her hoof while rubbing his stomach, which snapped her out of her thought.
"Oh, I'm sorry Angel, but your going to have to wait a little longer for your salad, because I don't have the necessary ingredients to make it, so i'm going to have to go to town and pick them up." said Fluttershy
As disappointed as Angel was, he just waved her off and left the kitchen.
With that, Fluttershy went into her closet and grabbed her saddlebag and placed it on her back, than proceeded upstairs to get some bits.
Once she was done she headed back downstairs and towards the front door, she opened the door and took a deep breath, smelling the morning air, she then exhaled and closed the door behind her and started on her way to Ponyville square.
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Meanwhile in another part of ponyville, Bulk Bicep was in a field getting his workout on, doing push-ups, sit-ups and things of that nature. Bulk Bicep was the epitome of masculinity, he was toned to the core, with muscles rippling throughout every part of his body... except his wing, I mean his wings made it look like Scootaloo had wings like Princess Celestia, but today was the day were he was going to try and change that.
" 51....52....53....54....55....56....57....58.......59..........60.....YEAHHH " Bulk counted out as he finished up the last of his push-ups, with sweat rolling off his brow from his vigorous workout session.
" Now for the whole reason I came out here, time to work these puny wings. " So he started with stretching his wing, which wasn't very easy since there wasn't a lot of wing to stretch.
He then flapped his tiny wing slowly lifting him of the ground and in ten minutes time, he was above the orchard tree. The tree was about half the size of Twilight 's house.
"YEA! That's a new record." Bulk Biceps yelled at his achievement. He continued flying for another five minutes, using all the strength he's built up over the years, but he started to feel a constant burning sensation in his wings
" I can do it, I can do it, I can do it " is what he was saying in his head, But not long after, his wing power was fading and before he could attempt to land his wings gave out. " Ohhhhh Noooooo " is all he was able to say before he started free falling headfirst to the ground below, "WHOOOOA" crashing through a few trees only to end up getting stuck between two in the process. "AHRG, UHMP, EUHG, GOT.. TO.. GET.. FREE. " but no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't free himself from inbetween the trees, so after about five minutes of struggling to get free, he finally gave up hope. " HELLOOO, CAN ANYPONY HEAR ME, HELLOOO. " not long after he got stuck he started panicking, thinking that nopony would find him. " HELLLLP!!!...., SOMEPONY!!!, ANYPONY!!! "
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Meanwhile Fluttershy still on her way to the market to pickup the groceries, was stuck in thought. " Oh, it's such a beautiful day out, the perfect day for me to hangout with my friends. " but her thought was cut off when she heard a faint rustling noise nearby, she started to venture forward, but then she came to a complete stop when a thought struck her, " Oh dear, what if it's a Timberwolf or..or some other type of horrendous monster that eats ponies, oh,no,no,no. " and with that thought she headed back to the path that lead to the market, that was until she heard a very faint " HELLOOO, CAN ANYPONY HEAR ME, HELLOOO. "
" Ummm, hello, is anypony there? " she replied wondering where the mystery voice came from, but the voice didn't answer back, so she thought she was hearing things, holding a hoof to her head trying to see if she could catch the tiniest hint of the voice, after about three minutes of nothing she decided it was time to leave and pickup the groceries, but just as she turned around she heard the mystery voice again, " HELLLLP!!!...., SOMEPONY!!!, ANYPONY!!! " but this time it sounded scared and panicky, like it's life was in danger. She threw caution to the wind and dashed towards the voice, " Ummm... hold on, i'm coming. " She couldn't hear the voice anymore, but she had a good idea of which direction it came from, so as she was running she had to jump over a couple fallen trees and tree branches, but after a while, she started to worry for the mystery pony. " Oh dear, what am I going to do... hello are you still there? "
" HELLO IS SOMEPONY THERE, PLEASE HELP, I'M STUCK " Bulk said hearing somepony in the distance.
" Oh, ummm, yes, where are you? " replied Fluttershy
" I DON'T KNOW, I'M STUCK BETWEEN TWO TREES. " retorted Bulk, ready to be freed from the trees
Fluttershy headed to the voice, it seeming to get closer with every hoofstep and before she knew it she had found the pony, but the way she found him, she couldn't help but let out a little giggle, " Heehee, ummm, mister are you ok, are you hurt? "
"YEAHHHH, I'M FINE, JUST GOT NERVOUS IS ALL, THOUGHT NOPONY WAS GOING TO FIND ME. " Bulk said finally relaxing
" Well, don't worry I'll try to get you out of there, I hope. "
Fluttershy floated up and pulled Bulk free from the tree's. Fluttershy couldn't stop giggling at his predicament, which resulted in Bulk to blush. Fluttershy started to leave when Bulk spoke up.
"Where are you going?" Bulk asked, his blush not leaving his face. Fluttershy giggled and smiled at him.
"I have shopping to do." Fluttershy replied and Bulk blushed harder at her smiling face. If he didn't believe in love at first sight, he believes it now. Fluttershy left to go and shop for Angel. It didn't take long to get most of the ingredients and all she had left to do is get the cherry. Fluttershy placed two bits on the counter then reached for the cherry, but her hoof was slapped away.
"Are you trying to steal from me?" The clerk asked angrily.
"Oh no. I'd never do that. I'd paid the two bits, see?" Fluttershy said pointing at the bits.
"It's four bits now since today." The clerk said sternly. Fluttershy looked down and rubbed her forhooves together.
"But I two bits is all I have left." Fluttershy said and a bulky stallion stood in front of Fluttershy.
"LOWER YOUR PRICE!" Bulk said staring intensely down on the clerk.
"Okay fine, take your cherry and go." The clerk said backing away, then Bulk took the cherry and placed it in Fluttershy's saddlebags.
"FOR HELPING ME EARIER!" Bulk said smiling. Fluttershy then kissed Bulk on the cheek which made Bulk blush bright red.
"Thank you. I'll see you later then." Fluttershy said smiling before leaving to make Angel 's meal.
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Oh, well that explains the minor shift in writing style. The pacing in this chapter is an improvement, albeit still a bit rushed. It's also nice to see Bulk Biceps enter the events, and I like the characterization of him as having a soft side underneath his tough exterior. However, the reason for the down votes is still most assuredly the grammatical issues, but with three writers in the byline, I trust that will work itself out. (Speaking of bylines, "inspired by" is a curious phrase with which to describe your co-writer.
) Anyway, I'm sorry to hear about Fluttershy2424's problems. I hope he'll be able to write more in the future, but regardless of the writer, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
4306575 yo! I can't write the fourth chapter until I get some info. I'm trying my best at the moment. I actually tried to mimic his writing style. I'm not taking ownership to this story, but I like to help my friends. If you want to see my writing style, you'll have to check out my stories.
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