Different world. Different rules. I am percived as an animal, A beast who is nothing but food or decoration for rich griffons. But still, I have a friend... whom may be able to help me reach my salvation... I just hope there is one to reach for.
That words are not better as: "What could go wrong?" I think everyone know the destructive power of this words. My gues is, Discord himself enchanted this words.
Was a nice idea with the Chess Game. And the reaction from Maya was awesome, too
4187188 Bu-But I don`t wanna. Cliffs are usually tall and dangerous. I still love life Please don`t make me jump the cliff. You will make the many people who favorited this story very sad if I jump off the cliff. It would mean no more story
Will another moustache be enough to calm your nerves maybe?
Just in case it isn`t enough, have 15 more. I don`t need them anyway
4187215 Does "play" work? Anyways, Hope you enjoyed the story. No, I will not be jumping off a cliff, an Yes I am working on the next chapter. Talk to you later maybe, beacuse right now, I will return to being lazy. Bye for now.
Oh the cursed words has been spoken. And while it seems nice for them to quickly get along, I feel it's a bit more stupid, no offense or anything it just that I feel they should have more time to adjust and have a bond as they slowly trust each other. That way when he DOES write and all then she understand why he didn't do much at first. Or at least in my opinion.
4254535 I suppose you do have a point. Though, are you sure they get along? You have only seen a few words being spoken thus far after all. They haven`t even known each other for a day, only a few minutes. Just cause they don`t break out into a fight the second they talk to each other dosen`t mean they get along. Just thought I would make that statement.
Well, you've done this several times now through the chapters so a simple typo is out of the equation. I do believe that the word you ment to use was "quite" rather than "quiet". The two words have different meanings and even different phonetics.
Quite; Is an evolution of the word adequate and used as such in a sentence. It can however be a demeaning way to mark disinterest if used alone.
Quiet; Is the notion of keeping sound to a minimum. Or the lack of it in general.
So by these two word descriptions your sentence would essentially mean "silently majestic" and if that is the case it would be written "quietly majestic".
PS: This is a very comon mistake so don't fret about it.
So am I the only one noticing the insults thrown at Molestia... no wait Queen Sunbutt, no that's not right ah yes Celestia. LOL you make the RED team proud.
That words are not better as: "What could go wrong?"
I think everyone know the destructive power of this words. My gues is, Discord himself enchanted this words.
Was a nice idea with the Chess Game. And the reaction from Maya was awesome, too
4187148 Great Idea. Changing words now!
4187156 OH MY GOD! What have I done to this poor human? ;P
4187163 I don`t know. Possibly fucked with fate itself. If he dies I`ll blame it on you since those last words were your idea.
4187169 But YOU changed the words! I was just warning you!
4187171 OY! Don`t blame this on me. You were the genious who suggested it! Deal with it.
4187176 If someone tells you to jump from a cliff, are you doing it?
4187179 Ummm... I`ll get back to you on that. in the meantime look at a mighty moustache.
4187182 Nice mustache... STOP TO CHANGE THE SUBJECT WE WHERE TALKING ABOUT!!!
4187188 Bu-But I don`t wanna. Cliffs are usually tall and dangerous. I still love life Please don`t make me jump the cliff. You will make the many people who favorited this story very sad if I jump off the cliff. It would mean no more story
Will another moustache be enough to calm your nerves maybe?
Just in case it isn`t enough, have 15 more. I don`t need them anyway
4187200 ... I dont know if you play dump or not
4187215 Does "play" work? Anyways, Hope you enjoyed the story. No, I will not be jumping off a cliff, an Yes I am working on the next chapter. Talk to you later maybe, beacuse right now, I will return to being lazy. Bye for now.
4187255
You are Lazy? PAH!
I'm SUPER LAZY!
Thats like normal Lazy but with a cape
See you later, maybe ^^
The "tour" should be "your".
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Yeah, the underline is hard to see. It's between "stuff" and "you". I also just really wanted to use that pic
Getting really interesting now.
II haven't read it yet, but yay for a Griffon YHaY. I can edit, if needed.
dan dan dan Oooooooo
What could possibly go wrong? So cliché, so much fun anyway. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Yesssss~ another chapter is brought to us! we are pleased. Why, oh why do you have to tempt fate Victor?
Oh the cursed words has been spoken. And while it seems nice for them to quickly get along, I feel it's a bit more stupid, no offense or anything it just that I feel they should have more time to adjust and have a bond as they slowly trust each other. That way when he DOES write and all then she understand why he didn't do much at first. Or at least in my opinion.
4254535 I suppose you do have a point. Though, are you sure they get along? You have only seen a few words being spoken thus far after all. They haven`t even known each other for a day, only a few minutes. Just cause they don`t break out into a fight the second they talk to each other dosen`t mean they get along. Just thought I would make that statement.
4254619 true.
+ Great. + I smiled legitimatly for once. What could possibly go wrong?
What could possibly go wrong?
Why? Just why? Don't everyone know that saying things like that makes every, EVERYTHING! GO WRONG?!
Anyway its a great chapter and a rather intersting story if i do say so myself... I can hardly wait for the next chapter to relese!
OMC that dream?! WHAT?! I forget what chapter! The one chapter where he was dreaming! OMC was that luna?!
Don't you just love it when people ask themselves: "What could possible go wrong?"
Ah Murphy, even after al these years your laws are still in place.
Well, you've done this several times now through the chapters so a simple typo is out of the equation. I do believe that the word you ment to use was "quite" rather than "quiet". The two words have different meanings and even different phonetics.
Quite; Is an evolution of the word adequate and used as such in a sentence. It can however be a demeaning way to mark disinterest if used alone.
Quiet; Is the notion of keeping sound to a minimum. Or the lack of it in general.
So by these two word descriptions your sentence would essentially mean "silently majestic" and if that is the case it would be written "quietly majestic".
PS: This is a very comon mistake so don't fret about it.
So am I the only one noticing the insults thrown at Molestia... no wait Queen Sunbutt, no that's not right ah yes Celestia. LOL you make the RED team proud.
THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME
Next chapter? Thanks