YAY!!!! IT LIVES!!!!

I am happy that you made a new chapter. It has been a long time in the making. Keep up the good job you are doing. I do hope you well have a new chapter sooner then the last one.

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Yeah, sorry.
My bad about that disappearing thing. I wish I could blame this last semester for it, but i'm just a lazy fuck.
Just got my eyes fixed with Lasik, so I decided it was a good enough time to get some motivation and post.
I shouldn't fall behind, considering I have a rough sketch of future chapters formulated.
But that also depends on how distracted I get with Capcom's Monster Hunter 4 Ultimate (MH4U), great game... ;)

5770607 fair enough. My fics are on hold because, initially, Kingdom Hearts 2.5 HD came out, but now I'm on Majora's Mask 3D.

5770781 Reminds me... I pray they don't flub the new KH. Would make me very disappointed.

5772438 Agreed

Errrrm. I dunno about this story.

It's not just the Alicorn OC; it's that plus he's apparently sexing up/has sexed up all the mares plus he tells off Celestia, for something that sounds very out of character for her, with Luna taking his side (of course). And he's the moral high ground on top of that. Those are a lot of things to swallow.

5776505 And yet you read it. Feel the shame of the dirty, dirty, clopping
Hahah. But in all seriousness, it is just one iteration of the world twisted in a way that I can shove a story in there. You aren't allowed to take things that seriously in a fanfic. There is just so much you miss out on if you take each role 'by the book'. If I want to paint Celestia as a little bit of a controlling tyrant, sure. If I wanted to make this extra un-accurate I could always kill everyone ;)

Point is, you are reading clop written by an amateur (I hated writing and passed with C's for english in my grade and high schools, I don't hate it as much anymore though), directed by guilty conscience (due to a strict christian background), written mostly at 11pm or later(in small bursts). Just have fun with it!