A dark soul wanders Equestria once more. It looks for a physical form to rule Equestria once again. To shower the land in darkness and sorrow.
The Princesses can't stop it, but there is something that can. The Elements of Harmony. The bearers are only bearers. The task may be simple, but how can you convince your saviours to save your race, to save you. When you can't even convince yourself. Your doomed.
Unless,
"Have them love life and have life love them in return. Let them see what they are truly fighting for. Then maybe, just maybe, you'll have something worth fighting for".
Part 1 of The Beings of Harmony Chronicles
Status: Under Refurbishing
Sounds good the Concept seams stable.
can't wait to see some shock and D'aaw.
Thank you, your so nice
I like it!
CLIFFHANGER!
It was just getting interesting too
Ha,ha I know, I'm glad that it's good enough for that kind of comment. Thanks I specifically enjoyed writing Discords game of cards I have a big back story on the evil and prophecy, so hang tight
i like this story so far can't wait to see more of it
i love it
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Oh no, the return of a cold-hearted ruler in Hex does not sound good at all . Also, I love each of the fillies' characteristics, but the two that surprises me the most are Vibrant Sky who doesn't boast like RD and Crystal Clarity who enjoys making dresses for those ponies who are less fortunate. And oh gosh, we have another Pinkie Pie in the mix in Lucky Joy.
Shit is gonna hit the fan soon
Wonderful and heartwarming chapter. Season Harvest bonding with her new family was great, but she sure strong for a filly if she can break an apple tree.
3923555 well in her defence she is born from magic, and of the blood of one of the strongest mares around, and that the apple tree was old anyway.
Okay now I'm just confusing myself.
I am absolutely loving this story so far; the characters (referring to your OCs, including the Hex guy) are all nicely developed and each have three-dimensional personalities, which makes the story seem more equivalent to the show in many ways. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thank you I'm so glad that you enjoy my story don't worry. You'll see plenty more
HEY YOU MR. WRITER!Good job....I think I'll keep my eye on you...
I never thought of Chrysalis as evil more desperate, out of options and a bit paranoid
nice
Ko when's the next chapter I want to see the excitement of this adventure.
3973457 KO when are the next chapter coming I'm dying to know what happens next please.
3973457 KO when is the next chapter coming.
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It will come in due time. I'm making sure that the next chapter has plenty of read in it. I also have a lot of school assesmemts to handle too soo can't write as often as I want to. Please forgive any inconvenience I may have caused.
6578168 KO your forgiven I'm just glad that this story isn't dead and hope to se more later on soon.
6578168 KO also hope you check out my story hope you like and favorite it PLEASE I promise it's awesome.