• Member Since 31st Jul, 2013
  • offline last seen Mar 3rd, 2016

Havelock


Just a young brony, looking to get better in writing,

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They're coming Razor, run, hide, don't lose hope, never lose hope... I'm here, never lose hope. The portal is in Alaska, get there before you turn, you'll be safe there. Get there, and we'll be together.

Together, Forever,

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 11 )

I love this beginning, will be waiting for MOAR!!!

OH boy. You have piqued my interest, I anxiously await for more.

I like this. Very curious as to what's going on. So many questions I hope will be answered soon.

Oh... well... this took a turn. You gotta do what you gotta do though I suppose.

It was promising until you turned the OC into a Gary Stu. Sorry dude, I'm out.

Well, this is...interesting?

It saids in the desc, she was a plush. Is she the size of a plush, or normal size?

Guys, I have no idea if you can see this, but Affinity isn't looking good from my perspective. Please either comment here or PM me on what should be done with this story. Also check out the blog post on it and comment there on what should be done, if you'd like. As of now, I am considering simply scrapping this story in favor of something else. Tell me what you think.

Meh...It's ok...Ya done ya best.
Also...slow update is also one of the reason you don't get much if at all feed back.
How will they feedback if they forgot the story?

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