Shining Star is unique. So is her sister, Midnight Flower. Star is an alicorn. Midnight is an Earth Pony. Both live in the Everfree Forest. But their family is made up of the forest most deadly creatures. Timberwolves, Hydra, a Manticore, and the wise Phoenix.
Star and Midnight live in harmony with the forest. Nothing is out of balance for this peace. But those who enter the forest follow one rule: Take what you need but not of greed, else
the forest shall make you bleed. If you follow the rules then the Animals will not kill you.
The peace between Star's and Midnight's family and the Everfree Forest with all it's dangers. How will the mane six react when they find out that the forest holds more than just an old castle, a Zebra, and a few dangers?
No One would think that Star's secret would change Equestria forever.
If you're having lore problems, just remember you're using an alternate universe tag. You can pretty much make your own Equestria at that point.
As for the plot, I don't know. Just make sure it's solid and interesting. The best way to find ideas is from looking at other good fics, or anything with a good story.
For your OCs, you should probably have only Shining Star be the only alicorn OC. Unless you're going with the alternate universe idea I mentioned earlier, alicorns should be far and few between. They're extremely rare and represent something greater. To have 2 or 3 alicorn OCs running around together may reduce the significance of what alicorns are.
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1 - only one was ever planned.....
2 - without my notes, i have no idea where this was going. Or even what started it
3 - I have no idea what the heck im doing. I am a Juryrigger, not a Forger. Building thing is extremely hard. That includes stories.
4- You know how old this thing is? I'm actually surprised you found it.
5 - Congrats at being the first to comment!