Mistakes were made. The royal line of Equestria is in danger. Can a promise be kept? Will a nation be saved?
The mysterious pegasus going by the name Promise is trying to do right. He's made some mistakes in his long life, and now he hears about an opportunity to finally keep his word.
As with anything I write, I must preface this with the fact that it's bad, and I should feel bad. =)
Cover image is by Equestria-Prevails on deviantart.
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I don't normally read stories on the new stories page but the cover art drew me in.
Overall I will read the next chapter before I decide on my opinion of this story.
Writing wise its pretty good, just a few errors here and there
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3817242 It's Promise speaking, asking Sparkler to repeat what he says, but the wording isn't super clear there, so I could see where someone might get confused.
As an unrelated aside, I wish people would give reasons for downvotes. It's not like I can improve the story or my writing in general based on thumbs. Even them thar opposable ones =(
3817270 Well I don't want to give you either until I read another chapter. It could be interesting but I want to read another chapter first.
I love it omg
8021199 Oh god, why are you reading this, lol. It's so dead. So very, very dead.
8021249 bc i have nothing better to do and im bored lol youre the only one im following whos updating their stories