On her way back from Zecora's house, Pinkie Pie finds something super. On a cloud high in the sky, Horse Power makes magic. Oh, and a cat has a really bad day.
Comment if you would, especially if it's bad things. I am totally happy with bad things
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Liked and faved, just because Horsepower is one my favorite background ponies.
I'm giving a thumbs up for the premise. If you would focus on showing more than telling I think this could be a pretty good read. It's really manic too, but It's a Pinkie story so... yea.
wow, why did you bash on your own story so much? it's actually pretty good, even with pinkie having a skyrim moment in the beginning.
I found this rather endearing. Well-written.
umm...correct me if I'm wrong, but blood thinner for the elderly sounds kinda dangerous, doesn't it?
no apostrophe on friends
ah ha! there's where that extra apostrophe came from!
white mound's bed
Well, the ship's still afloat, and not much the worse for wear.
Cute, short, and fairly well written.
Not bad.
2065734 Honestly, I wrote this in a very short period of time (six hours), and kind of went with a minimalist aproach to the scenes, trying to stuff a lot of backstory into as few words as possible. I'm not super happy with it, and may end up heavily editing it to flesh it out at some point this week. Or not, I'm a lazy bum.
2066631 Because I am a perfectionist, and hold my own work to a very high standard. I hate everything I write because it could always be better.
2067265 Thanks, I tried
2067286 Cranky has a pretty bad ticker... Guess why!
And he's not THAT old 
and obviously the bed is made out of candy bars
That squirrelly apostrophe, never stays where I put him
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that's silly, if it were made of candy bars, pinkie would have eaten it in her sleep, injuries or no!
2071476 Normally this would be true, but fortunately for Horse Power, Pinkie felt like a nut, and mounds don't. Have nuts...
I think I made a really bad joke.
If you plan on making a chapter 2, then I plan on reading more.
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8 years of theatre and 4 years of food service
please don't get me started on innuendos, we'll be here all night
2071581 I'm still kinda on the fence about whether I'll continue this or not. I'm not really much of a romance writer, my forte lies somewhere closer to the psychological thriller genre. I guess it'll depend on whether the writing bug bites me again. This is not an invitation for you to summon a plague of biting insects and sic 'em on me.
2071635 It's true, both those places give you an excellent education in things indirectly saucy. Consider the innuendos... on hold.
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don't listen to him, summon away while he's still unawares!
i did'nt read the story.. ii just wanted to say this : BAD THINGS
I need a sequel.