Sombra gets a new consort as the drums of conflict echo from all sides.
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So short...just 1 scene.
Well, this was a near useless filler chapter, giving only a single thing to the theory I have: Sombra knows everything and is just waiting for the right moment.
I hope the next chapter will be better, we need action, not fillers!
-Zeph
4597827 I second this motion!
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Agreed. Not completely.
This chapter showed that our protag identified itself as "Rose".
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True, that did happen. I presume, it is because of Sombra's influence, based on his last actions on her.
Nevertheless, this chapter was still just a filler with two tiny little things for that over two thousand words.
Mistakes are getting to be less, I like that. Stills seems as if there is some confusion in perspective at points, I feel like it flips between first person and second.
4598667 Dude, I'll take filler over taking immensely longer any day. It also revealed to us the Silver Shield probably isn't who he says he is, either. It also moved along the plot nicely, because Rose really didn't have anything to do after those guys were killed and being locked up. Now she has an objective. In a literary sense, this will likely be a catalyst chapter.
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Dude, I know about the Silver Shield thing, I already commented on it in my first comment, earlier. And just for the record: our dear author could make things happen. So your argument is invalid.
What you failed to notice is, however, that the protagonist called herself Rose.
This and the other small sniplet, that's everything that happened.
And if you can't take an action filled, 5k+ words chapter, then what are you doing here??
4601599 Action isn't the most important part of a story. Its also character depth and decision making. Its world building and learning about the depths of a single character.
I didn't see you referencing Silver Shield at all in the thread I was talking about, just Sombra knowing more than he says. I didn't fail to notice Rose referring to herself that way, I just didn't address it, because you had already, and felt it had been adequately argued. And yes, the author could MAKE things happen, but what kind of story is that? Suddenly, the Balrog kills Frodo two seconds into the story. The end. Good luck next time. This is much more of a bridging gap between scenes, just as important and vital as any other scene.
What do you mean, by the way, what am I doing here? I'm here because I love this fandom and the people in it. Why are you here? To pass judgement on others because they cant 'take a 5k+ chapter'?
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Reading your comment taugth me a valuable lession.
How much I hate arguing, again.
So let us just stay to what we believe, I do not need yet another argument over the internet, in my life.
And I am not going to respond to you.
4602022 Well, I actually love arguing, especially with people who seem to know what they are talking about. It allows people to see the other sides point of view. But I understand your wishes, and will respect them.
Have a good night, sir.
More? *meep* If, if thats okay with you?
I kinda figured Silver wasn't part of the resistance, since Sombra apparently wrote him into The King and I.
4602029 was that, a friendly argument? is such a thing even possible on the Internet?
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FRIENDLY TALKS? ON THE INTERNET? IMP0SSIBLE!!!
Prediction: I think Silver Shield is just Sombra!