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Eclipse Lightning


"Life is like a deck of cards. We're dealt good hands and bad hands. But not a single card is worthless or useless to have been played." - Brony since June 2013

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A simple outburst is all it can take to send Vinyl Scratch running from crazed fans. When she finds herself in the small record shop Stray Vinyl, she meets the shops owner, Crescent Beats and falls for him almost immediately.

Crescent Beats is a record store owner, music enthusiast, amateur mixer, cover artist and DJ Pon-3's biggest fan. So when she stumbles into his shop, he wants to learn more about her, but doesn't think a big star like her would want to be with a nobody like him.

With a little help from his music, his group, The Outsiders and even Vinyl herself, they'll see that love and music go hand in hand. No matter what your standing is.

NOTE: They're all human, and I mean no copyright infringement in any way with some of the songs I mention in the chapters, or if the chapter's title is a name of a popular song. All rights belong to the respective artist's and record labels.

EDIT: I have added the Octavia tag for a slight change in how the story is going to flow. Hope you enjoy all the same.

Enjoy!!!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 29 )

This is a really good start to a really good fiction keep them coming

3846804 Thanks for that. I admit I'm stuck right now, but everyone gets a slump right??

It saddens me to see something that's actually good with more dislikes than likes. Keep rocking man :rainbowdetermined2:

3857780 Thank you for that my friend. I feel it's just cause where I'm at right now, there's a lot of stuff I need to get done, and the story is soon gonna be on hold.

3873853
I fear that it might be for another reason, but then the only guess I have just seems so absurd. I remember a time when any OC story would be torn down, and I'm certain things have changed. So I'm not sure if I can attribute it to that or some other reason that I just can't comprehend. It's a great story and I look forward to reading more. I'll wait patiently for it to update. Just don't keep us waiting too long. :ajsmug:

3874078 Whatever the reason, I will try to get at least two or three more chapters up before I have to put it on hiatus. It'll only be temporary, but I won't be able to update it for close to three months when that happens.

I promise you, once I get the time back, the story will continue. Promise! :pinkiehappy:

5137086 That, and I'm trying to work on my really big story (that everyone hates) and I'm going through career training for the USAF.

So, I've got a lot on my plate....

5137103 ohh I understand. And also, whats the story? :p

5137108 "An Eclipse at Twilight". I haven't even gotten to the real meat of the story, and boy are people on here critics.

5137114 yeah I know really people on here can be real haters. The other day my friend used my account to read a story and she commented dont hate so much on this story. The next day I check there are like 50 hate responses back to me saying they can judge whatever they want and they hate the story lol

5137131 It's true that they can.

It doesn't mean they have to make a noise out of it.

(although "Twilight" is an exception to this train of thought)

5137144 yeah true about how they can but I dont see why they dont give 'an eclipse at twilight' a chance. It looks like something I would enjoy so I'll read it :D

5137161 Thanks. Once I'm finished Chapter Three, there's gonna be a nice Author's Note for that...

5137169 Well, I thought I'd just show them what happens when they hate on me, is all.

I want the story to be great; to be better than what it is now...

Can't do that if everybody decides they don't wanna help...

Comment posted by BrotallySwagical deleted Oct 14th, 2014
Comment posted by BrotallySwagical deleted Oct 14th, 2014

5140593 Yeah... looking for a Chromebook to help out on that one. Then Christmas presents for when I visit home... I've got a date to plan too!

:pinkiegasp:

Awww yehhh dat prologue tho

5145973 Meh... I tried. It wasn't the best prologue, really.

Good news, just got my Chromebook in.

Slightly bad news, I need to wait for my roommate to show up to get it set up. Our router is pretty much locked down to only a few devices.

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