Pretty good I guess

I have a question, how is Rumble part of this story ?

I love dis

The history is perfectly sound, and Sol Invictus was a large part of the pantheon of the gods at this time!

Hurray for having no life!

Interesting I would like to see more.

You...you did your history homework...

...but...all the ponies are human? Or is Maximus going to be a human in a pony world? I'm a bit confused about that.

This I Like!! :D

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This is a fully humanized story. All characters are humans. Except Gummy. Gummy will still be an alligator.

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Rumble comes in much later. Though I can't tell you much, I can say that he will play a large role in Maximus' life.

This is actually doing a lot better than my other fan-fics. I wonder why.

3811947 Oh...I'm a little disappointed, but I'll keep reading anyways.

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Just because you have an extensive knowledge of history doesn't mean you have no life. It means you understand the lives of others that came before you.

He pressed the steel

At this time, steel was not used, only iron was available.

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Oh jesus, imagine if they did have steel?

I think the freaking Velites would be given armour

6143605 imagine a full cohort armed with steel tower shields and blades marching in testudo formation towards a group of gaulish foes, how they would feel seeing their arrows and blades either shattering against the metal or skittering off of it and then the Romans are upon them. (Playing as Carthage in total war rome 2, I'm thankful this wouldn't happen. Though it will be funny because one of my armies is nothing but what the carthiginians are famous for.... elephants.)